
“Closet-Shower by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Success is to be measured not so much by the position that one has reached in life as by the obstacles which he has overcome. —Booker T. Washington
“Hurry it up Lucy! I gotta goooo!”
“Almost done, Stuuuu-eeey,” Lucy snickered, delighting in the thought of him dancing outside the door, clutching his groin.
“Okay!” Stuart squealed. He knew she didn’t mean it. She never did. His only goal was to avoid further humiliation by restraining nature’s call until granted access to the privy. He didn’t always win. Eventually he figured out that he could avert the entire ordeal by rising 15 minutes earlier every morning.
Years later at a family gathering Stuart thanked his sister for inspiring his success.
“What? Whatever Stu-ey!” Lucy didn’t get it of course.
~kat
Another 100 words for Rochelle Wisoff-Fields’ Friday Fictioneer’s Challenge prompted by her photo of a closet-shower above. This week I had two different stories pop into my head.




August 16th, 2017 at 12:51 pm
Hi Kat! Hope all is well! Another great one!
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August 16th, 2017 at 12:53 pm
Thanks Lynn! So happy to see you! I noticed your coming back posts a few days ago. Hope you are doing well. I’m doing my usual…working, writing, catching the blessings that come my way in between. HUGS! ❤
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August 16th, 2017 at 1:13 pm
So glad you are well dear Kat! hugs back
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August 16th, 2017 at 5:07 pm
Fabulous! 😎😎😎
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August 16th, 2017 at 5:39 pm
Thank you Dorna.
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August 17th, 2017 at 3:22 am
Hilarious, but with a lesson! We owe so many of our habits to circumstances in the earlier years.
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August 17th, 2017 at 6:32 am
It’s true. Sometimes our baggage makes us stronger! 😊
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August 17th, 2017 at 8:51 am
Dear Kat,
Two winners in a row. So typical of brothers and sisters. (I have one brother 😉 ) Love it.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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August 17th, 2017 at 9:10 am
Yes it is. The rivalry is real! 😊
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August 18th, 2017 at 5:57 am
Haha! My sister thankfully wasn’t this mean to me 😀 Fun story, Kat.
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August 18th, 2017 at 6:19 am
That’s good! Siblings can have a lasting impact on us!
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August 19th, 2017 at 4:02 am
So true! About the power of adversity. Sometimes, all it takes to succeed is rising early.
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August 19th, 2017 at 7:13 am
Yes. The old saying about the early bird. 😊
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August 20th, 2017 at 11:22 am
I love gentle irony. Well done.
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August 20th, 2017 at 11:28 am
Thank you Gran. 😊
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August 21st, 2017 at 2:29 am
well written
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August 21st, 2017 at 10:20 am
Thank you.
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