when planning for a lovely stroll,
with dog in tow,
to play some fetch
at river’s edge
take care to notice red dawn skies
-word to the wise-
you might regret
the plans you’ve set
if you ignore the coming storms
when you’ve been warned
you’ll feel the pain…
relentless rain.
kat ~ 27 July 2016
A Minute Poem for Jane Dougherty’s Poetry Challenge based on the painting by Franz Marc entitled “In the Rain”, including the following word prompts: Rain, Red, Relentless, River, Regrets.
July 27th, 2016 at 3:25 pm
Loved this Kat…relentless rain
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July 27th, 2016 at 3:33 pm
Thanks Sudha! Part of the credit goes to Jane who provided those two words as well as three more! 😊
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July 27th, 2016 at 3:42 pm
Yes definitely Jane needs appreciation. I just have done mine too. Here it goes
https://srisudhak.wordpress.com/206/07/27/aching-heart/
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July 27th, 2016 at 3:43 pm
Sorry …its here
https://srisudhak.wordpress.com/2016/07/27/aching-heart/
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July 27th, 2016 at 5:21 pm
Interesting form. I do like it when lines repeat. 😊
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July 27th, 2016 at 4:14 pm
And rain isn’t fearsome. Just annoying 🙂 Nice minute poem—it’s an addictive form 🙂
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July 27th, 2016 at 5:20 pm
I agree! I really do like the form! 😊
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July 27th, 2016 at 4:50 pm
nice Kat!
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July 27th, 2016 at 5:22 pm
Thanks Lynn! 😊
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July 27th, 2016 at 6:06 pm
You could always bring an umbrella, lol! Very nice Kat!
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July 27th, 2016 at 7:04 pm
Yes…that was their error in ignoring the signs! Haha! Just having fun! 😄
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July 28th, 2016 at 1:25 pm
and you’ll get drenched!
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July 28th, 2016 at 2:33 pm
That’s right! I took a cue from the old saying, Red sky in morning, sailors take warning.” 🙂
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July 29th, 2016 at 6:59 am
Hey !
Thanks for following my blog 🙂
I would like to invite you to #MiracleChallenge which is a weekly writing challenges to write Story/Tiny Tale/ Poem/ Haiku.
Here is the link for latest prompts for 5 different challenges :
https://miraclegirlblog.wordpress.com/2016/07/26/miraclechallenge-week-7-dated-26th-july-1st-august-2016/
Hope you feel inspired and have fun writing them.
From,
Miracle 🙂
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July 31st, 2016 at 7:04 pm
Lovely
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July 31st, 2016 at 7:19 pm
😊
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August 3rd, 2016 at 8:24 am
[…] you’ve been warned | like mercury colliding… […]
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August 3rd, 2016 at 4:48 pm
Lovely (and funny) minute poem.
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August 3rd, 2016 at 7:50 pm
Thanks Merril! 😊
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