
While some take to the sea to sun
To bake their skin a golden brown
Some stroll the beach, some take a run,
But you will find me treasure bound.
To bake their skin a golden brown
Smooth oil-slathered head to toe
But you will find me treasure bound
Along the shoreline tote in tow.
Smooth oil-slathered head to toe
Sun-screened, embarking on a quest,
Along the shoreline tote in tow
I think I like the blue ones best.
Sun-screened, embarking on a quest
Reflecting on their passage here
I think I like the blue ones best
Bright gems of stone honed by the years
Reflecting on their passage here
Some stroll the beach, some take a run
Bright gems of stone honed by the years
While some take to the sea to sun.
kat ~ 18 June 2016
For Jane Dougherty’s Poetry Challenge, a Pantoum inspired by the photo above and these prompt words: Bright, smooth, shore, blue, reflecting




June 18th, 2016 at 9:37 am
Wow! A great poem and a very hard form. I love what you have done with it. Inspiring!
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June 18th, 2016 at 9:46 am
Thanks TJ! It was indeed a challenge. 😊
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June 18th, 2016 at 9:59 am
I have been playing with it now. It is a most intriguing form. Hope you are enjoying a lovely weekend.
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June 18th, 2016 at 10:07 am
Best wishes in your Pantoum play. Yes! The weekend is lovely, sunny, cool, breezy perfection here in the mountains! 😊
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June 18th, 2016 at 10:19 am
Lovely to hear. It is the first weekend we have had in ages where it has not rained. I may actually get to the weekend car boot sale for the first time in months. Treasures await!!!
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June 18th, 2016 at 10:27 am
Happy Hunting! 😊
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June 18th, 2016 at 10:29 am
Merci!
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June 18th, 2016 at 10:39 am
Wow!! Pebbles – treasure on banks
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June 18th, 2016 at 10:55 am
I love collecting rocks! 😊
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June 18th, 2016 at 1:31 pm
One more similarity between us…I belong to a city on banks of river godavari…I too love collecting them…
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June 18th, 2016 at 1:51 pm
Our River is the Roanoke. 😊
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June 18th, 2016 at 11:06 am
We could do with some of that sun here 🙂
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June 18th, 2016 at 11:11 am
It’s been a rough week for both of our countries. Hugs to you sweet lady! 💕
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June 18th, 2016 at 11:17 am
The world seems intent on showing its unlimited capacity for inflicting tragedy on itself.
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June 18th, 2016 at 11:22 am
Sadly true. 😢
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June 18th, 2016 at 2:40 pm
Oh, you know I would be found right there with you! 🙂
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June 18th, 2016 at 3:12 pm
Oh yes! I know you would!
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June 18th, 2016 at 2:43 pm
Still looking for those heart-shaped rocks are you? 🙂
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June 18th, 2016 at 3:13 pm
It’s an obsession!
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June 21st, 2016 at 3:49 am
[…] Treasure Bound | like mercury colliding… […]
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June 21st, 2016 at 7:47 am
I can picture it…many treasures to be found. (K)
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June 21st, 2016 at 8:38 am
It is one of my favorite passtimes. 🙂
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June 21st, 2016 at 12:54 pm
Me too.
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June 21st, 2016 at 8:09 am
Lovely, Kat. On Sunday, we were both walking on the beach looking for treasures, and resting in our chairs slathered with sunblock. 🙂
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June 21st, 2016 at 8:38 am
How wonderful for you. I live in a landlocked area with a flowing river for comfort, but I do long for the seaside and it’s salty spray. I am hoping to find me way there next year perhaps…sigh.
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June 21st, 2016 at 10:58 am
We’re right by a river, too (actually two if we go into Philadelphia), but it’s great to get to the ocean. I hope you make it. 🙂
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June 21st, 2016 at 3:02 pm
Thanks! We are on the same coast. I love the Atlantic. 🙂
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June 23rd, 2016 at 4:57 am
This evokes beautiful images. I really love your poem!
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June 23rd, 2016 at 5:48 am
Thank you so much! The seaside is my happy place. ❤️
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June 26th, 2016 at 5:39 pm
Beautiful Kat. So summery 🙂
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June 26th, 2016 at 6:15 pm
Thank you Mandi. I enjoyed losing myself in the imagery as well. I live too far from the seaside! 😊
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