“So as I was telling you, Marge has been beside herself since she found out about Carol and….”
“Sweetie, pass me the pliers, please.”
“Which ones are those? The red handled thingamabobs?”
“No, that’s the wrench…black handle.”
“Okay. Here you go. …Carol and Tom. Do you know they have the nerve to show up together at the…”
“I’ll take that wrench now…red handle?”
“So this is a wrench. Here you go. …the party that Marge is hosting with Sue Ann. I’m not sure if she should be mad at Sue Ann or Carol..it was Sue Ann that…”
“Throw me that rag, will ya? Almost done here.”
“Danny…Which rag? You have three. The red, the green or…”
“Red’s good. Thanks babe.”
“…well Sue Ann invited the two of them. She must know it will be upsetting…”
“All done! Wanna know what I think? Tom’s a jerk and you should probably watch your back around that Sue Ann…”
“Exactly! Just what I was thinking!”
(Dan was a very smart man! A smart man indeed!)
kat ~ 3 February 2016
(173 Words)
This story is inspired by the photo above, provided by Pixabay and my friend PJ at FFfAW (Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers). Read other stories or enter you own HERE.





February 3rd, 2016 at 8:07 am
Wonderful…
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February 3rd, 2016 at 8:36 am
It’s a common conversation scenario…the wise man pays attention. 🙂
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February 3rd, 2016 at 8:54 am
The fact that she doesn’t know the tools made me laugh because that’s so me. I remember similar exchanges with my dad–but he wasn’t as patient! Thanks for the reminder!
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February 3rd, 2016 at 9:44 am
I am just recently figuring out the difference, but only because I’ve needed to use them myself! 🙂
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February 3rd, 2016 at 12:08 pm
I love this story! LOL! The whole time I thought he wasn’t listening.. but he was! Great story, Kat!
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February 3rd, 2016 at 12:12 pm
Like I said…smart man, that Dan! Smart man! 🙂
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February 3rd, 2016 at 12:28 pm
I would say, you are absolutely right! Hahaha! Wonderful story!
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February 3rd, 2016 at 12:55 pm
Thanks PJ. I always approach these challenges initially with a slight bit of panic…and then finally the stories come to me. 🙂
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February 3rd, 2016 at 1:10 pm
Your stories are always so good, I would never know you panic when you first see them.
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February 3rd, 2016 at 1:12 pm
I usually have to sleep on them before I start seeing a story. I’m so glad most challenges give us a week to simmer. 🙂
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February 3rd, 2016 at 1:13 pm
That’s true. I never looked at it that way.
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February 3rd, 2016 at 12:24 pm
Good use of dialog. 🙂
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February 3rd, 2016 at 12:56 pm
Thank you Deborah! I may have heard that conversation play out one or two times! 🙂
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February 3rd, 2016 at 2:42 pm
Lovely, how you intertwined the conversation around both what the woman is saying and what the man needs to fix the car.
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February 3rd, 2016 at 3:25 pm
Thanks Mandi! I heard this conversation before! 😉
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February 3rd, 2016 at 3:23 pm
LOL great flash fiction! 😀
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February 3rd, 2016 at 3:29 pm
Thank you. I love doing dialogue. It is such a lively format!
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February 3rd, 2016 at 7:04 pm
I like this one!
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February 3rd, 2016 at 7:08 pm
Me too. This was a fun story to write! 🙂
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February 3rd, 2016 at 7:19 pm
I can see it would be! fun
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February 4th, 2016 at 12:42 am
She doesn’t miss a beat and he just keeps working…and listening thank goodness! Nice relaxed dialogue.
Ellespeth
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February 4th, 2016 at 1:36 pm
I love the way this conversation plays out and Danny’s constant requests for tools works really well. It leads us to think he wasn’t listening, when in fact he knew exactly what she’d said. Well written story, Kat.
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February 4th, 2016 at 3:38 pm
Thanks Millie. I see these two having a near perfect partnership in the conversation department! 😊
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February 8th, 2016 at 6:08 am
I love the banter or should I say gossip 😉
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February 8th, 2016 at 7:19 am
Haha! Yep! Had fun with that! 😀
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February 8th, 2016 at 1:32 pm
Funny. The interruptions worked well with the story.
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February 8th, 2016 at 1:36 pm
Thanks. I’ve had a few conversations like this. 🙂
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