
Photo Credit: ©Marta Shmatava
The mem’ry of that autumn night
still haunts her dreams these many years
she fills her veins with opiates
the mem’ry of that autumn night
and cries for him through groggy tears
but death has closed his ears to hear
the mem’ry of that autumn night
still haunts her dreams these many years.
~kat – 3 February 2016
A Triolet (new poetry form for me) inspired by the painting above by ©Marta Shmatava in response to Jane Dougherty’s weekly poetry challenge. If you would like to try your hand at a triolet or read other takes on this prompt, click HERE.
(A Triolet is and Eight line stanza/Eight beats to the line. The first line is the refrain and is repeated as the fourth and the seventh line. The second line is repeated as the eighth line so the first and last couplets are the same. The rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB. The capitals denote repeated lines.)




February 3rd, 2016 at 1:00 pm
Sad, but beautiful poem.
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February 3rd, 2016 at 1:01 pm
Thank you Janice. I think the triolet form lends well to the haunting quality of it. 🙂
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February 3rd, 2016 at 1:19 pm
Your poem is awesome but sad.
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February 3rd, 2016 at 1:21 pm
Thanks Ranu…taking my cue from the painting led me there…:)
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February 3rd, 2016 at 1:21 pm
Well done.
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February 3rd, 2016 at 1:21 pm
Thank you…as was yours! 🙂 I like this poetry form.
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February 3rd, 2016 at 7:00 pm
Sad and gorgeous!
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February 3rd, 2016 at 7:01 pm
Thank you Lynn!
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February 3rd, 2016 at 7:19 pm
🙂 love it
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February 3rd, 2016 at 9:17 pm
Hmmm are we going into a hauntingly sad week? Only Sunday shall tell, huh? Great poem!
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February 3rd, 2016 at 10:08 pm
It’s all in the editing Kathryn. I can find a bit of happy in anything! 🙂
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February 4th, 2016 at 12:50 pm
Very hauntingly beautiful!
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February 4th, 2016 at 3:36 pm
Thanks PJ! I think the fact that this poetry form calls for the repetition of certain lines adds to the haunting feel of it 🙂
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February 4th, 2016 at 3:40 pm
You’re right, it really does.
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