Wouldn’t You?
how can it be? fluffy clouds
swirling past my outstretched
arms, the sky so crystalline
blue, I’m squinting, cool breeze
tossing my hair, sun rays,
warm on my back…flying,
I’m not sure quite how, lost,
my aversion to heights, here,
to take in the sights, a bird’s
eye view, where the niggling
every day is blurred into
a beautiful sea of green and
blue, wet, shiny rooftops,
and the shimmer of leaves
topping the trees…floating,
soaring…bUgs IN My teETth,
tOO cloSe, toO CLosE to the SUN…
SHIT!
WHAT TIME IS IT? I’M LATE! shit, shit, SHIT! Glasses, where are my…
teeth, brush my teeth, take a piss, bad hair day, bad, bad, bad, damn alarm…
damn fucking alarm…
Need to text work, tell them I’ll be…
SICK, taking a sick day…phone on mute,
going back to my soft, warm bed, back,
back to my lovely dream, it’s the
only sensible thing to do, don’t you agree?
Wouldn’t you do the same if you were me?
~kat
NaPoWriMo #2 Prompt: To write a poem that similarly resists closure by ending on a question, inviting the reader to continue the process of reading (and, in some ways, writing) the poem even after the poem ends.
April 2nd, 2019 at 12:49 pm
So easy to imagine, especially after reading this.
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April 2nd, 2019 at 2:10 pm
It’s only happened a few times…missing the alarm, but when it does I become a maniac!
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April 2nd, 2019 at 1:04 pm
More that often.
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April 2nd, 2019 at 1:50 pm
I know…right., 😉
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April 2nd, 2019 at 1:50 pm
Yup!
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April 2nd, 2019 at 3:41 pm
Isn’t it strange, and silly, how we go into panic mode and rush around if we are late. We are already late and will never, ever, change that by rushing.
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April 2nd, 2019 at 3:49 pm
Yes it is! Or we angst and complain if stuck in traffic. What choice do we have? We live life with such urgency. Where I work everything is a problem needing to be solved yesterday.
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April 2nd, 2019 at 4:03 pm
…and you are probably fixing the same “other people’s mistakes” as you were 5, 10, and 15 years ago. Just that they can make more mistakes, and faster, than before, due to the progress of IT!
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April 2nd, 2019 at 4:04 pm
Exactly Peter! How did you know?! Ugh!!! I need a life! 🤣
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April 2nd, 2019 at 4:18 pm
I’m pretty sure that the world would continue to turn, function, and prosper, if 50% of top managers were culled. Not that I have radical views or anything!
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April 2nd, 2019 at 6:18 pm
Oh I totally agree. It’s the grunts who do all the work anyway!
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April 2nd, 2019 at 6:27 pm
’twas ever thus!
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April 2nd, 2019 at 6:27 pm
Yep!
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April 2nd, 2019 at 3:46 pm
I love it, I love how you used the lettering to teach me a new word, and to play with how it will sound when read and to depict that sweet, hectic time of when we miss our alarm for work.
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April 2nd, 2019 at 3:59 pm
Thank you. It’s crazy how missing the alarm can throw one’s entire day into a loop! 😄
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April 2nd, 2019 at 4:01 pm
This is great. I had that kind of morning today!
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April 2nd, 2019 at 4:03 pm
So sorry. I hate when that happens! 😳
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April 2nd, 2019 at 6:01 pm
I really like this you have done this so well 💜💜
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April 2nd, 2019 at 6:24 pm
Haha! Too much?! Just being honest…I do lose my mind when that happens!!! 🤪
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April 2nd, 2019 at 6:26 pm
💜💜 you smashed it, Kat 💜
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April 2nd, 2019 at 6:27 pm
Thanks Willow! 😊
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April 3rd, 2019 at 1:59 am
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this, Kat!!
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April 3rd, 2019 at 12:54 pm
Thank you Ennle! I take it you’ve been there! haha!
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April 3rd, 2019 at 3:52 pm
Oh yes, many days!! 🙂
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