passions from a
common source
sorrow to joy,
of life, good and ill,
the mystery, the torrent,
red, ’round me roll’d
the lightning flying by
the thunder, the storm,
when heaven was blue,
a demon in view
~kat
A Black Out Poem for MindLoveMisery’sMenagerie Sunday Writing Prompt based on the poem below, “Alone” by Edgar Allen Poe
From childhood’s hour I have not been
As others were—I have not seen
As others saw—I could not bring
My passions from a common spring—
From the same source I have not taken
My sorrow—I could not awaken
My heart to joy at the same tone—
And all I lov’d—I lov’d alone—
Then—in my childhood—in the dawn
Of a most stormy life—was drawn
From ev’ry depth of good and ill
The mystery which binds me still—
From the torrent, or the fountain—
From the red cliff of the mountain—
From the sun that ’round me roll’d
In its autumn tint of gold—
From the lightning in the sky
As it pass’d me flying by—
From the thunder, and the storm—
And the cloud that took the form
(When the rest of Heaven was blue)
Of a demon in my view—
August 19th, 2018 at 10:22 pm
yes, but, you know: that demon was no smarter than a leaf blower,
but he could do things with his tongue women only dream of.
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August 19th, 2018 at 11:12 pm
That’s evil 😳
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August 19th, 2018 at 11:33 pm
well, he is a demon after all. wouldn’t expect him to be nice, would we?
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August 19th, 2018 at 11:37 pm
That’s true
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August 20th, 2018 at 10:41 am
Very well and cleverly done Kat!
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August 20th, 2018 at 10:41 am
Thank you! 🙂
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August 20th, 2018 at 4:37 pm
Fabulous retelling! 😎🥀
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August 21st, 2018 at 1:27 am
Thank you! I love this poetry form when presented with a verse or song prompt! 😊
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August 20th, 2018 at 6:10 pm
I feel this 💜
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August 20th, 2018 at 10:30 pm
It is that age old battle within. ❤️💜❤️
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August 21st, 2018 at 1:19 am
Yes indeed it is, and it can swamp you. 💜
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August 21st, 2018 at 1:25 am
❤️💜❤️
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August 20th, 2018 at 6:43 pm
fascinating approach to the prompt – definitely puts a new spin on the poe-m;
I rather like it – yes, indeed, I do.
(I wonder what Poe would think? I believe he’d approve. 😀 )
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August 20th, 2018 at 10:07 pm
Thank you. thant is quite a compliment. I can only hope the great Poe would approve!
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