May 6, 2018

Pond – 42 Day 6

By Kat Myrman

Pond

ever long for

swift current sweeps
the murky dross, unsettling

still, mired in inertia
cool surface, scarcely rippling
from raindrops and pebbles

~kat

Day 6 for Jane Dougherty’s Daily Poem – 42 Challenge. Photo by Couleur at pixabay.com.

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10 responses to “Pond – 42 Day 6”

Jane Dougherty
May 6th, 2018 at 9:49 am

This is a deep one! I like it, that secret life of the pond.

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- Kat Myrman
  May 6th, 2018 at 10:06 am
  
  Thank you Jane. It took some tweaking to remove the obvious question that I started with…pond, do you ever long for…😊
  
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  - Jane Dougherty
    May 6th, 2018 at 10:08 am
    
    It’s a good one. Obvious isn’t always good in my book—we should have to think to get the sense out of a poem.
    
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    - Kat Myrman
      May 6th, 2018 at 10:43 am
      
      😊
      
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willowdot21
May 6th, 2018 at 12:21 pm

I like this one too 💜💜

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- Kat Myrman
  May 6th, 2018 at 1:23 pm
  
  Thanks😊
  
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Woman walking Max
May 6th, 2018 at 3:10 pm

Good poem Kat – I like the rhythm of it and the images. Nice one.

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- Kat Myrman
  May 6th, 2018 at 6:37 pm
  
  Thank you. 😊
  
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dornahainds
May 6th, 2018 at 6:21 pm

Beautiful Excellence. 😎🥀😎🥀😎🥀

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- Kat Myrman
  May 6th, 2018 at 10:17 pm
  
  Thank you Dorna! 🤩
  
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