they hardly notice
the armed guards, or so they say,
their hearts aflutter
~kat
A Collom Lune (A tercet (three-line poem) that has 3 words in the first line, 5 in the second, and 3 in the third. There are no other rules.) for Sonya’s Three Line Tale Challenge inspired by this photo by Manu Sanchez via Unsplash
like mercury colliding... 
December 29th, 2017 at 1:18 pm
Oh, you said a mouthful here!
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December 29th, 2017 at 1:48 pm
It’s sadly the new normal in our weaponized and polarized society. 😟
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December 29th, 2017 at 3:30 pm
You know it, love
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December 29th, 2017 at 3:14 pm
Marvelous! 😎😎😎🥀🥀🥀
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December 29th, 2017 at 9:42 pm
Your title described your Collom Lune perfectly. A new world indeed.
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December 29th, 2017 at 9:51 pm
Sadly true Irene. I wish it wasn’t.
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December 30th, 2017 at 8:56 am
a sad truth! wish it will turn out different someday 🙂
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January 1st, 2018 at 3:49 pm
I know Alice. We can hope. 🙂
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December 30th, 2017 at 10:28 am
Bravo ! I think your poem works really well – so much implied in so few words.
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December 30th, 2017 at 10:47 am
Thanks! I wanted to challenge myself with a new poetry form! I like it. 😊
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December 30th, 2017 at 1:34 pm
Oooh, it’s like an easy Haiku, I like the form! Excellent example, too.
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December 30th, 2017 at 11:22 pm
I like the form too. Thanks Kathryn. I need more practice with this one. 😊
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