
- Solar-Eclipse by Kesie91 at Pixabay.com
The nerve of that pebble of a satellite! She actually thought she could step in between me and my worshipers. Did she really think she could blot out my brilliance?! That little twerp with her crater-pocked face and cold lifeless core; who does she think she is? She only shines at night because of me! Everyone knows I am the greatest star that has ever blazed from the center of a universe. In fact, (and I know facts, believe me) I am the greatest star in the history of all the universes combined! No one knows how to work the planets like I do. Every time I turn, they orbit around me. They can’t help themselves. That’s how great I am.
So now I hear old pock-face is planning a coup. It won’t last, of course. I could send out a solar flare, the likes of which the universe has never seen, with such fire and fury that electronics would die and electrical grids would blow out, and everyone would still worship me. Only I get to decide when things go dark on the faces of my planets. So, this little eclipse thing won’t amount to much. That two-faced lunatic might make headlines for a day with this stupid stunt of hers, but she’s a fake. She’ll drive you crazy if you let her.
So, don’t worry. I’ll be back in a very big way, brighter than ever, heating things up in ways you never thought possible. It’s gonna be great!
look toward the light,
to candles in the darkness,
stars in the night sky,
to reignite hope’s embers
before they fade into dust
it’s cool in the shade
lulling us to linger there
embraced by shadows
~kat
For Colleen Chesebro’s Weekly Poetry Challenge. This week I am doing a Haibun-Tanka-Haiku combination inspired by the prompt words, shadow and light. Have a wonderful light-filled week. 🙂





August 22nd, 2017 at 11:31 am
Brava.. 🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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August 22nd, 2017 at 12:21 pm
Thanks! Enjoyed this one. 😉
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August 22nd, 2017 at 3:09 pm
Kat! This Haibun is brilliant! I love it… I know who you’re talking about, LOL! Excellent!! ❤
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August 22nd, 2017 at 3:13 pm
Haha! I thought you might! 😉
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August 22nd, 2017 at 3:20 pm
I laughed so hard. You nailed it! 😀
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August 22nd, 2017 at 3:21 pm
I couldn’t help seeing the similarities. 😉
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August 22nd, 2017 at 4:27 pm
Clever. Well done!
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August 22nd, 2017 at 8:54 pm
Thanks Peter. Writing is a great stress and angst releaser! 😊
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August 22nd, 2017 at 5:02 pm
yes the lunar lunatic lol! enjoyed this, 🙂
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August 22nd, 2017 at 8:54 pm
Yes indeed! 😜
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August 22nd, 2017 at 10:29 pm
Outstanding! I love it! You certainly have a writer’s mind 🙂 ❤
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August 22nd, 2017 at 10:34 pm
Thank you Walt. Such a nice complement! 😊
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August 24th, 2017 at 5:28 am
So clever – the create the characters in a cosmic power battle, with a bad tempered sun ! Really entertaining Kat.
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August 24th, 2017 at 6:02 am
Thanks! Had fun with this one!
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August 29th, 2017 at 2:04 am
[…] Eclipsed | like mercury colliding… […]
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August 29th, 2017 at 4:36 am
This was such an enjoyable and fun story, Kat I really enjoyed it 🙂
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August 29th, 2017 at 1:47 pm
Thank you Judy. Sometimes losing what you thought was important helps you see what really is. ❤️
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August 29th, 2017 at 3:04 pm
You are right there, Kat! 🙂
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