how fragile life is
a hiccup in time
how fragile life is
touched by the divine
miraculously
a hiccup in time
yet vast as the sea
a breath, a soft sigh
miraculously
though all things must die
to be born again
a breath, a soft sigh
beginning to end
interconnected
to be born again
sweetly perfected
how fragile life is
interconnected
how fragile life is
kat ~ 28 February 2017
(A Terzanelle Poem)
February 28th, 2017 at 10:17 pm
Very lovely poem. Touching.
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February 28th, 2017 at 10:17 pm
Thank you Tanya ❤
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March 1st, 2017 at 12:24 am
Wow that is such a pretty poem. ❤
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March 1st, 2017 at 1:23 am
What a gorgeous poem, at once beautiful and wise…and what a clever form, which you’ve used so apparently effortlessly. Love it! Blessings, Harula x
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March 1st, 2017 at 5:15 am
Thank you Harula. Blessings to you as well. ❤
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March 1st, 2017 at 10:47 am
Brava. 🌹🌹
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March 1st, 2017 at 11:39 am
Thank you Dorna 😊
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March 1st, 2017 at 4:48 pm
absolutely love this !! 🙂🙂🙂🙂
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March 1st, 2017 at 6:11 pm
Thank you Willow. I like this form! ❤
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March 1st, 2017 at 6:18 pm
You do it so well!
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March 5th, 2017 at 12:14 pm
It shows that you love this form. This one is beautiful and clever too. An absolute delight!
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March 5th, 2017 at 1:25 pm
Thank you Peter. I do love the forms that include repetition. They are very much like psalms to me ❤
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March 5th, 2017 at 4:28 pm
I too love a good refrain!
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