
Painting by Heinrich Vogeler Sehnsucht (Traumerei) c1900
Dreary morning veiled in white
from darkest night
at break of day
she comes to pray
for hope, for healing grace, for peace
for hate to cease
for love’s pure balm
to bring us calm
from endless nights of terror’s rage
to turn this page
of history
to set us free.
What are you thinking Lady Blue
as you peruse
horizon’s wake
this bleak daybreak?
is your fair lover ‘cross the sea
oh could it be
that your heart yearns
for their return?
or is it wanderlust’s appeal
seeking to steal
your soul away
this break of day?
kat ~ 8 July 2016
A couple of Minute Poems for Jane Daugherty’s writing prompt, “Daybreak” and the painting you see above.
The Minute Poem is rhyming verse form consisting of 12 lines of 60 syllables written in strict iambic meter. The poem is formatted into 3 stanzas of 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4; 8,4,4,4 syllables. The rhyme scheme is as follows: aabb, ccdd, eeff.




July 8th, 2016 at 3:27 pm
You got a lovely rhythm going in these two poems, touching and sad.
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July 8th, 2016 at 3:28 pm
thanks Jane. I was hoping it wasn’t too sing-songy! 🙂
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July 8th, 2016 at 4:39 pm
It’s in the nature of the form to get that rhythm. Without it, it doesn’t work.
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July 8th, 2016 at 4:40 pm
I am seeing that after reading a few others 😊
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July 8th, 2016 at 4:38 pm
beautiful!
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July 8th, 2016 at 4:41 pm
Thanks Lynn! ❤️
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July 8th, 2016 at 5:06 pm
lovely flow Kat!
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July 8th, 2016 at 5:08 pm
Thank you Lynn. The four syllable lines were the most challenging. 😊
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July 8th, 2016 at 5:41 pm
What a melancholy painting and a perfect poem to go with it. You captured the mood just right. 🙂
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July 8th, 2016 at 5:48 pm
Thanks! This is one of my favorite weekly challenges. 🙂
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July 10th, 2016 at 9:23 am
I loved both poems, but the first gave me chills. Powerful!
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July 10th, 2016 at 11:07 am
Thank you Tricia…last week called for a prayer…
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July 10th, 2016 at 10:42 pm
You certainly have a knack for the minute poem– I know it’s not so easy to achieve the flow you got. I particularly like the first one… so passionately touching recent tragedies.
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July 11th, 2016 at 11:55 am
Thank you Janice. It was a very emotional week for so many.
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July 11th, 2016 at 4:42 pm
Yes it was– very upsetting events.
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July 12th, 2016 at 3:29 am
[…] Blue Lady Blue | like mercury colliding… […]
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July 12th, 2016 at 7:18 am
I like both of these very much.I think the first one is especially powerful. I can imagine someone someone saying it aloud, and the repetition of the words gives it a sort of cadence, or oratorical flair, if that makes sense. 🙂
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July 12th, 2016 at 11:29 am
Thanks Merril. I agree with you. I wrote it as a prayer. I could very well imagine this spoken out loud.
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July 12th, 2016 at 1:27 pm
I love both! Beautiful. Simply beautiful! Though these lines just struck me, and I reread the first one a few times as it’s more relatable to me on a personal level:
“to bring us calm
from endless nights of terror’s rage
to turn this page
of history
to set us free.”
Perfect!
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July 13th, 2016 at 6:12 am
Thank you for your comment and most of all I wish you peace.
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July 13th, 2016 at 6:16 am
🙂
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July 16th, 2016 at 7:40 am
I enjoyed these poems. I sense the feel of the ancient writers.
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July 16th, 2016 at 9:02 am
Thank you John. Sometimes my old soul finds her voice in the midst of this twittery tweeting modern world we live in. ❤️
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July 16th, 2016 at 7:41 am
Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Amazing poetry and thoughts by a talented writer. Please read and enjoy.
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July 16th, 2016 at 9:00 am
Thank you for sharing this John. The past few weeks have been drenched in emotion. I am thankful to have an outlet through writing. Peace to you. ❤️
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July 16th, 2016 at 10:16 am
I’m glad. I release my thoughts and emotions to my poetry and story. You are welcome.
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July 16th, 2016 at 10:33 am
😊
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July 16th, 2016 at 10:28 am
This had a good flow. Beautiful write.
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July 16th, 2016 at 10:36 am
Thank you! The minute poem is a wonderful form for creating symmetry and flow with its lyrical quality. 😊
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