
some see the world in syllables
they speak in an iambic tone
solitary souls, but not alone
a stanza’s pause, invisible
punctuated space in between
crystalline waves of lucid dreams
brain soft-wired ethereal
meters mingled in rhyme explored
engaged in trysts with metaphors
delightful musings, lyrical
syncopated rhythm flowing
poet’s tender voice bestowing
visions of all things beautiful
in syncopated streams of words
twenty-six letters, nouns and verbs
kat – 15 April 2016
For Jane Dougherty’s Weekly Poetry Challenge, a Constanza, consisting of five or more 3-line stanzas. Each line has a set meter of eight syllables. The first lines of all the stanzas can be read successively as an independent poem, with the rest of the poem weaved in to express a deeper meaning. The first lines convey a theme written in monorhyme, while the second and third lines of each stanza rhyme together.
Rhyme scheme: a/b/b, a/c/c, a/d/d, a/e/e, a/f/f………etc.




April 15th, 2016 at 12:04 pm
Great Poem
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April 15th, 2016 at 12:08 pm
You got more out of it than I did! My eyes must have glazed over while I read the rules 🙂
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April 15th, 2016 at 12:09 pm
I labored over this one for many hours on and off. Definitely need to give it another try. It looks so simple until…:)
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April 15th, 2016 at 12:18 pm
Actually, the fact that the first lines all rhyme gives a poem formed of just first lines a sort of cohesion. It’s the ending that’s abrupt. Will have to see about that.
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April 15th, 2016 at 2:05 pm
A marvellous constanza, Kat!
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April 15th, 2016 at 3:24 pm
Thank you Kim! I worked hard for this one! 🙂
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April 15th, 2016 at 3:47 pm
Love this one!
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April 15th, 2016 at 4:48 pm
You understand being a wonderful poet yourself Lynn. ❤️
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April 15th, 2016 at 5:33 pm
Wow that’s a compliment
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April 15th, 2016 at 6:54 pm
I love reading your poetry! 🙂
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April 15th, 2016 at 10:35 pm
Your so kind
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April 15th, 2016 at 4:13 pm
Lovely and truthful poem Kat.
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April 15th, 2016 at 4:44 pm
Thanks Mandi. A poet knows. 😊
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April 15th, 2016 at 4:30 pm
You have described yourself perfectly, Kat!
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April 15th, 2016 at 4:43 pm
Haha! Thank you. I try! 🙂
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April 16th, 2016 at 10:40 am
I love this! 🙂
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April 16th, 2016 at 10:42 am
😊 I somehow knew you would my soul friend. Saw you perusing this morning and hoped you’d find this one! ❤️
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April 16th, 2016 at 2:52 pm
I look forward to more perusing! I love all the variety of your writing; held together by the golden thread of your beautiful voice. ❤
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April 16th, 2016 at 5:18 pm
Thanks Cheryl Anne…you know…☺️
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April 17th, 2016 at 1:24 pm
Thankfully, I do. 🙂
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April 19th, 2016 at 6:03 am
[…] Poet-Speak | like mercury colliding… […]
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April 19th, 2016 at 7:19 am
This was amazing–beautiful, lyrical. I loved how the first lines form a separate poem. This form seems easy, but I found it difficult.
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April 19th, 2016 at 9:08 am
I agree Merril. The form at first glance seems like it would be simple, but it is deceiving. I spent hours tweaking this one!
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April 19th, 2016 at 9:17 am
“poet’s tender voice bestowing” My favorite lines amidst a series of exceptional lines.
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April 19th, 2016 at 11:27 am
Thank you Ken. I appreciate the compliment and encouragement.
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