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Hush
Silent
Soft humming
Grace embracing
Lull
Grace
Lovely
Undeserved
Boundless
Gift
Breath
Slowing
Deepening
Heart murmuring
Calm
Heart
Trusting
Unguarded
Brimming
Swell
Peace
Blissful
Centering
Mindful presence
Rest.
kat ~ 27 February 2016
A trio of Lanterns interspersed by a duo of Lanturnes…imagining an Asian-themed garden of paper lanterns for Jane Dougherty’s Poetry Challenge.
To read more click HERE. Here are the poetry form descriptions:
Lantern Poem Form:
line one: one syllable (Subject)
line two: two syllables (Description)
line three: three syllables (Description)
line four: four syllables (Description
line five: one syllable (synonym of or related to the first line)
Lanturne Poem Form: (5 lines/Syllable Pattern: 1-2-3-2-1)
February 27th, 2016 at 10:32 am
I’ve never heard of Lanturne Form before. It reads lyrically and looks elegant on the page. Also, the photo is so eye~catching, I thought it was the reflection of a moon at first. x
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February 27th, 2016 at 10:36 am
I hadn’t either. I love Jane’s poetry challenges for this reason. She introduces new forms often. Some are quite lovely!
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February 27th, 2016 at 10:50 am
What a calm, peaceful world you create, Kat 🙂
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February 27th, 2016 at 11:30 am
Thank you… I try 🙂
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February 27th, 2016 at 1:04 pm
Well done Kat. A peace bringing sense of calm:)
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February 27th, 2016 at 1:26 pm
Thank you…we all need some calm moments.
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February 27th, 2016 at 2:22 pm
That is lovely!!
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February 27th, 2016 at 4:53 pm
Thank you PJ!
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February 27th, 2016 at 2:46 pm
I’m learning so many new forms of verse and poetry from you Kat! Yes, this is wonderfully calming and peaceful to read.
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February 27th, 2016 at 4:57 pm
I used to write free form and an occasional sonnet because that’s all I knew. I love how particular forms add to the tempo and flow of words. 🙂
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February 27th, 2016 at 3:12 pm
Wow, just beautiful. You nailed the form and the poem turned out emotional and lovely.
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February 27th, 2016 at 4:58 pm
Thank you Mandi. I really enjoy these poetry challenges that teach a new form each week.
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February 27th, 2016 at 5:18 pm
This too is nifty! I miss the poetry class, always more to learn and I will have to check this out.
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February 27th, 2016 at 5:46 pm
You should Sarah. A new form almost every week. https://janedougherty.wordpress.com.
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February 28th, 2016 at 7:51 pm
very nicely done dear Kat!
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February 28th, 2016 at 8:21 pm
Thanks Lynn! I love this new form…well, it is new to me! 😊
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February 28th, 2016 at 8:52 pm
Yes It is very nice!
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February 28th, 2016 at 9:15 pm
😊
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March 1st, 2016 at 3:26 am
[…] Silent Swell […]
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March 1st, 2016 at 6:16 am
Lovely, Kat. I makes me feel calm to simply read these lines!
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March 1st, 2016 at 6:17 am
Thank you Merrill. Peace to you. 😊
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March 1st, 2016 at 6:19 am
🙂
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March 4th, 2016 at 12:59 pm
Those poems are perfect for a garden of hanging paper lanterns. 🙂
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March 4th, 2016 at 1:11 pm
Thank you Janice! Liked the idea of lanterns in a garden. Perfect poetry form! 🙂
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March 4th, 2016 at 5:55 pm
It was fun 🙂
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