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“I’ve heard there was a secret chord. Its harmonic resonance opens the gate of the fortress. If we can crack the code, maybe we can get inside before it’s too late.”
“You’re an idiot! Might as well play a swan song. Kiss your ass goodbye. It’s hopeless!
“Well, I have to try. The fort was built in 1856. Chromatic mediants were a common chord progression. I could start in the key of C Major and proceed into its diatonic mediant and submediant, E Minor and A Minor.
“Yeah, yeah, blah, blah, blah. Whatever makes you happy!”
Tom used an electronic keyboard to play the haunting chord sequence. Nothing happened. He tried another sequence and another and another. Leonard leaned against the stone wall.
“I told you, Tom. Here, have a smoke.”
“I don’t smoke. And I’m not giving up. How much time is left?”
“Not enough!” Leonard smirked, “3 minutes 47 seconds…46…45…44…”
“Shut up! I have a few more sequences I can try.” Tom played furiously, fingers trembling.
Suddenly, the latch burst open, its force shifting the massive door ajar. Leonard tumbled to his ass dropping his cigarette.
“Hah! I did it! Get up Leonard! You have a bomb to disarm!”
Leonard rushed the chamber where the bomb ticked, red LED numbers flashing, 50…49…48. He located the red wire, giving it a swift clip.
It was over by the time Tom arrived. He dropped to the floor next to Leonard. “Maybe I will have a cigarette. What is it you were saying about swan songs?”
Leonard growled at Tom while offering him a light.
“I know a few swan songs Leonard. I can play one for you if you like. But you don’t really care for music, do you?”
~kat – 30 January 2016
(295 Words)
A Flash Fiction Story for RonovanWrites Friday Flash Fiction Challenge. This week’s prompt:
-Use the first line of one of your favorite song and begin your story with that line. (REQUIRED)
-Word count of no more than 300. (STRONGLY SUGGESTED but I don’t want you to let it get in the way of creativity.)
My inspiration comes from the song “Hallelujah” by Leonard Cohen. I used the first line as required and borrowed my favorite line from the song for the end of my story, adding a bit of irony. 🙂
If you would like to read other stories or enter your own, click HERE.
January 30th, 2016 at 12:32 pm
Wow kat!!!
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January 30th, 2016 at 12:34 pm
Hi Lynn! Did you catch my little ironic twist at the end (playing upon the song verse and my choice of character names?) I just had to! 😉
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January 30th, 2016 at 3:33 pm
I did!
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January 30th, 2016 at 3:34 pm
Sorry traveling in car
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January 30th, 2016 at 3:44 pm
Me too now. Have a great afternoon! 🙂
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January 30th, 2016 at 4:46 pm
Thanks! I am seeing my folks
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January 30th, 2016 at 5:15 pm
Have fun my friend!
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January 30th, 2016 at 5:23 pm
Thanks x
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January 30th, 2016 at 1:22 pm
Clever use of the song.
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January 30th, 2016 at 1:24 pm
Thank you Trent. I decided to take the meaning of the song in an entirely different direction. I had a bit of fun with it! 🙂
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January 30th, 2016 at 3:45 pm
Exciting story and great use of that line from Hallelujah
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January 30th, 2016 at 3:54 pm
Thank you Mandi. 😊
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January 31st, 2016 at 9:41 am
Good to the last word .
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January 31st, 2016 at 10:04 am
Thanks Meredith. I enter a lot of these flash fiction challenges, but I must say, this story is one of my favorites. 🙂
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January 31st, 2016 at 11:25 am
This is wonderful! Hallelujah in one of my favorite songs too. I love how it ended, “but you really don’t care for music, do you?”
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January 31st, 2016 at 1:10 pm
Ha! You caught that! 😊
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January 31st, 2016 at 1:11 pm
Not until you mentioned it to Lynn! 😀 😀
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January 31st, 2016 at 1:16 pm
😊
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January 31st, 2016 at 10:58 pm
Great song!
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February 1st, 2016 at 11:47 am
Great song, and I am fascinated with sound magic and the Secret Chord. You certainly took it in a direction I’ve never considered. 🙂
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February 1st, 2016 at 11:49 am
Thanks Natalia. I’m married to a musician. I’m not an expert. But I find the history very intriguing. 🙂
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February 1st, 2016 at 11:53 am
If you ever discover the secret, remember that I want to know.
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February 1st, 2016 at 12:04 pm
Will do! 😉
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February 5th, 2016 at 3:19 am
[…] Swan Song by Kat Myrman (like mercury colliding…) Different. Wonder if she’s ever seen Hudson Hawk? 294 words, 3.6 GL, and 2% passive sentence structure. @kat_myrman […]
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February 6th, 2016 at 10:42 am
[…] This is part two then, to last week’s story. If you would like to read that first, you can click HERE for the link. […]
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February 6th, 2016 at 10:48 am
[…] This is part two then, to last week’s story. If you would like to read that first, you can click HERE for the link. […]
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