
Emily remembers the day she heard the ancient dreamtime story. She was working the night shift at the nursing home. Her favorite part of the shift was snack time. She would visit each resident with a tray of crackers and cheese or fruit and a selection of herbal teas, water or milk. It was during these nighttime visits that she got the opportunity to have a seat and rest herself.
Each person shared the most wonderful stories. There was Mr. O’Malley, a retired security guard whose beat ran along Chicago’s South State and Van Buren streets during the burlesque era of the 1950’s. His most treasured memory was the night he glimpsed Gypsy Rose Lee through the front window at Minsky’s. And then there was sweet schoolmarm, Miss Lucy. Never married, she always had an anecdote to share about one of her students, many of whom she had followed over the years, some quite famous.
But of all the residents, Mrs. Charlotte Jones was Emily’s favorite. Mrs. Jones had traveled to Chicago from Australia to live with her daughter and her family. She came to Shady Grove Nursing Home after taking an unfortunate spill on an icy patch that resulted in a broken hip. Here she received more intense care and rehab than her daughter was able to provide at home.
In retrospect, Emily often wonders if it was the full moon that night or the rain and wind hissing outside the window. There was an electricity in the air the moment she entered Mrs. Jones’ room. Emily was always cautious not to share any personal information with the residents, but on this night, she broke her own rules.
“Hello Mrs. Jones, did you have a nice visit with your family this evening? I think it is just lovely to see how close you all are. You are very fortunate.”
“Hey, how ya goin’ love? Yep, it was heaps good. What about you Emily? Do you have any ankle biters at home?”
“Oh no Mrs. Jones. My husband and I would love to have a few children, but after years of trying, we think it’s just not going to happen for us.”
Mrs. Jones eyes narrowed to a twinkle as she held Emily in her gaze. Emily couldn’t look away. Ugh! Why had she just shared that bit with Mrs. Jones? Something that personal can’t be taken back once it’s said out loud. Mrs. Jones smiled.
“I have a dreamtime story to tell you, love. It’ll take just a minute. My mum told it to me, and her mum before that. Many many years ago, a time before time, the great rainbow serpent who brought the wet seasons and floods, also deposited spirit children in pools of water across the land. The women who waded in the water became pregnant…” Mrs. Jones tilted her head, raising her eyebrows as if waiting for it all to sink in. “Every Sheila in my family has waded in that water. I can tell you it’s the dinky-di.”
“You think I should go to Australia and wade in some pool of water?” It all sounded a bit crazy to Emily.
“Well, you’ll never know unless you give it a fair go. She’ll be right.” Mrs. Jones smiled and gave her a wink.
Emily quickly changed the subject to the weather. But she couldn’t forget their conversation or Mrs. Jones’ dreamtime story. What if a dip in a pool on the other side of the world could make her dream come true. She had to try…”give it a fair go” as Mrs. Jones would say.
Emily settled in near the window, buckled her seatbelt and leaned her head on her husband’s shoulder. It was a long flight. She’d best catch a nap, if that was even possible. Tomorrow she would be wading in some magical pool in Northwest Australia. Mrs. Jones told her exactly where to find it. On the edge of town just past the Boab tree.
kat ~ 9 January 2016
A short story in response to RonovanWrites Friday Fiction Challenge. There’s nothing flash about this piece, but since there is no word limit, I went with it. 🙂 The photo above is the prompt for this week’s challenge. It features a Boab tree found in the Northwest region of Australia. In doing research for this story I learned quite a lot about the Boab trees of Australia as well as their relatives the Baobab trees of southern regions of Africa. If you would like to read other stories, or write one of your own, please click HERE.




January 9th, 2016 at 11:23 pm
OH! She’ll get preggers, I just know it! Great storytelling on this one.
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January 9th, 2016 at 11:24 pm
Yes…I think she will indeed! 🙂 Thanks! 🙂
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January 10th, 2016 at 6:11 am
More Kat I want to know more!!
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January 10th, 2016 at 6:44 am
😊 I am thinking about it…research …need more research to pull it off…but I’m thinking about it! 😊
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January 10th, 2016 at 6:57 am
Great 🙂
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January 10th, 2016 at 6:52 am
Kat, I loved your take on the prompt! Fantastic!
Oh I know the trials,and tribulations of trying for a baby, and the lengths people can go to, to make their dream come true…
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January 10th, 2016 at 6:55 am
Thanks Ritu! I hope the trials and tribulations you speak of produced that dream come true.
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January 10th, 2016 at 6:57 am
Twice over Kat, we were blessed, after a bit of a journey … And there are 2 angels in the sky with our names on them too…
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January 10th, 2016 at 7:05 am
Awe…so happy for you! I have an angel too … And my four lovely daughters who are now blessing me with grandchildren…❤️
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January 10th, 2016 at 7:10 am
I have a while to wait for grandchildren… But children are a blessing indeed ☺
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January 10th, 2016 at 7:16 am
As are grandpups! 😉 have a few of those too!
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January 10th, 2016 at 7:21 am
I will love it when the time comes!
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January 10th, 2016 at 8:46 am
I loved your story. I have a kernel of an idea, but ‘must do’s” crowd it to the back of my mind.
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January 10th, 2016 at 9:20 am
I spent more time on this one than most. That photo prompt called for a bit of research…and the more I learned, the more I needed to know. 🙂 Which is one of the reasons why I gave myself permission to veer from my usual flashes of fiction at 200 words or less. Until I started doing flash fiction, I never considered writing a book…now it rustles around in the back of my mind occasionally. 🙂
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January 10th, 2016 at 11:08 am
Wonderful story and I too believe she will get pregnant! I would love to know!
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January 14th, 2016 at 8:13 pm
From the stories I’ve read so far for this prompt, the next one may be related to it or make it possible to continue on in some way. 🙂
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January 14th, 2016 at 8:18 pm
That’s an intriguing prospect. Having never written fiction until a few months ago, I think I welcome that challenge! 🙂
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