
Photo Credit: etolbagam.com
“Where am I? How did I get here?”
The last thing Milly remembered, she was driving on some old country road. It was raining. Hard. But stopping was not an option. She had an appointment to keep.
“The road must be near by,” she thought.
As she stood sweeping leaves off her sweater, a flash of color caught her eye, startling her. Milly followed the flash to the base of an old hollow tree. One by one silly heads popped up. They reminded her of her childhood toys. Scary as they were, she slept with them every night to feel safe from the monsters she didn’t know.
Sounds of heavy equipment rattled just past a grove of trees nearby. Milly rushed over to see her mangled car being hoisted on a flatbed truck.
“What is happening?” she screamed. “Why can’t you hear me?! I’m right here!”
Just then, her grandmother’s voice whispered from behind, “There there, Milly dear. You’re in heaven.”
kat ~ 24 November 2015
(174 Words)
A story for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (FFfAW) Challenge #41. If you would like to read more stories or enter your own story, check HERE.




November 24th, 2015 at 5:46 pm
Oh no! Poor Milly! You’re so good, Kat, at writing such short stories that grab the reader. Amazing skill!
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November 24th, 2015 at 6:54 pm
Thanks Olga. I love this format! 🙂
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November 25th, 2015 at 1:16 pm
How bittersweet! She died in a car wreck but at least she went to heaven! Wonderful story Kat!
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November 25th, 2015 at 1:17 pm
Thanks PJ. It was certainly a bizarre photo this week. Took some imagination power. 🙂
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November 25th, 2015 at 1:26 pm
Yes, you’re right. It is a bizarre photo but it sure has brought out some adorable stories!
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November 25th, 2015 at 2:00 pm
Your title just made me realize that the “monster” toys are angels! Cute!!
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November 25th, 2015 at 2:04 pm
Yep…keeping her safe as she crosses over. 😉
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November 25th, 2015 at 2:10 pm
🙂
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November 25th, 2015 at 3:05 pm
Interesting and sad story. 🙂
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November 25th, 2015 at 3:18 pm
Thanks Susan. It was a weird photo! 🙂
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November 25th, 2015 at 3:37 pm
Wonderful short story Kat!
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November 25th, 2015 at 3:40 pm
Thanks so much Lynn!
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November 25th, 2015 at 3:42 pm
you are so good at those short stories!!
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November 25th, 2015 at 3:44 pm
🙂
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November 27th, 2015 at 8:13 pm
Oh no poor Milly…or maybe not..after all isn’t heaven going to be a lovely place and her grandmother is there, so perhaps it’s ok. Nicely done, you said a whole lot in so few words!
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November 27th, 2015 at 8:27 pm
Thanks Deb. Yes, I believe once she gets over the shock she will realize heaven is a lovely, safe place. 🙂
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November 27th, 2015 at 8:28 pm
🙂
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November 28th, 2015 at 4:19 pm
I sure hope my childhood toys are waiting for me in heaven! Great story title and afterlife experience.
Ellespeth
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November 28th, 2015 at 4:24 pm
It’s a lovely thought, isn’t it Ellespeth? I hope so too! 🙂
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November 29th, 2015 at 1:12 pm
Grandma and childhood toys to greet you in heaven. That would be lovely.
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November 29th, 2015 at 1:32 pm
Yes, I agree. 🙂
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