Through rain droplets
ambient lamp light glows warm
love is in the air.
Street
lamps shine
dreamlike through
fat rain droplets
guiding me
safely
home
I hardly noticed
it was raining that evening
when I saw you there
waiting under the lamp light…
like moth to flame, besotted.
~kat ~9 November 2015
(Haiku~Sept~Tanka)
A Haiku is a 3 line poem/syllables: 5-7-5; a Sept is a 7 line poem/syllables 1-2-3-4-3-2-1; and a Tanka is a 5-line poem/syllables: 5-7-5-7-7. I discovered this triune format through a poetry challenge and love the flow of it. J





November 9th, 2015 at 10:44 am
Thanks Kat…some new poetic styles for me to try out. ☺️
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November 9th, 2015 at 10:46 am
You’re welcome Frances. This is such a great place to learn new things while developing our writing skills 🙂
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November 9th, 2015 at 12:10 pm
I so agree ☺️
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November 9th, 2015 at 11:23 am
Gorgeous and mysterious!
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November 10th, 2015 at 12:30 am
Thanks Lynn. Seeing it on my way into work this morning was a magical moment. Have a good night! 🙂
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November 10th, 2015 at 7:28 am
yes sometimes something grabs us
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November 10th, 2015 at 2:08 pm
I love it when that happens though! 🙂
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November 10th, 2015 at 2:53 pm
yes me too!
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November 10th, 2015 at 2:56 pm
🙂
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November 9th, 2015 at 12:02 pm
Such a lovely poem, l love it!
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November 9th, 2015 at 12:05 pm
Thank you Daniela. It was raining today…and a Monday. So I determined to find something beautiful in it! 🙂 Have a lovely day!
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November 9th, 2015 at 12:13 pm
Thank you, and you! 😊
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