
dear luna,
how you move me
as if my soul were water
given to tidal swells and ebbs
you call me to sway, to dance
with my sisters and our mothers,
ancients who reside on veil’s cusp
summoned by your full kind face
‘round the rhythmic pyre’s crackle
you’re my North Star, my guide
illumine the darkest of nights,
full, gibbous, crescent, new
every night I look to you
dear sweet Luna
I see you
~kat~
NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 2 Challenge:
Write a platonic love poem. In other words, a poem not about a romantic partner, but some other kind of love – your love for your sister, or a friend, or even your love for a really good Chicago deep dish pizza. The poem should be written directly to the object of your affections (like a letter is written to “you”), and should describe at least three memories of you engaging with that person/thing.
Poetry Forms used:
On prompt, this is a Letter Poem, but I also added another twist, by creating a Concrete Poem.
Concrete poetry—sometimes also called ‘shape poetry’—is poetry whose visual appearance matches the topic of the poem. The words form shapes which illustrate the poem’s subject as a picture, as well as through their literal meaning.
This type of poetry has been used for thousands of years, since the ancient Greeks began to enhance the meanings of their poetry by arranging their characters in visually pleasing ways back in the 3rd and 2nd Centuries BC.




April 3rd, 2024 at 1:30 am
So beautifully written Kat. Moon is always such a big attraction in the night sky
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April 3rd, 2024 at 3:42 am
Thank you Sadje. It truly is!
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April 3rd, 2024 at 6:18 am
You’re most welcome 🙏🏼
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April 3rd, 2024 at 9:13 am
Not only do many of us fall in love with the moon, but we also fall in love influenced by the moon. Beautifully written Kat!
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April 4th, 2024 at 5:44 pm
Ah…so very true Peter! 😊
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April 28th, 2025 at 11:38 pm
lovely love letter to OUR Luna. Love it. Thanks.
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April 29th, 2025 at 9:22 am
She connects all of us from her place in the night sky. It gives me such comfort. 🌝
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