Finish the story 8/25/2018. Blog Hop
This story started with Tessa at The haunted wordsmith.
Teresa’s challenge details can be found here:
1 Copy the story below as it appears when you receive it (and the rules please)
2 Add somehow to the story in which ever style and length you choose
3 Tag only 1 person
4 If you choose to not participate or finish the story, please comment/tag the original post here so we know.
After serving thirty-five years in the military, Austin retired to a quiet little town in the middle of the Catskills. He had saved money every month since he enlisted so that he would never have to work another day when he left. His plan worked, but now he found life boring and uneventful. Every morning he walked down to Jennie’s Diner for coffee and a little conversation, then over to the library where he would whittle away the day. Three months of this routine and he was going stir crazy. That was until a strange woman asked if he had ever considered writing a book.
“I never really thought about it,” Austin said, flipping through a magazine.
“I have a story to tell,” the woman said, “and I have a good sense about people. You are the right person to tell my story.”
“Um, I’ve never written before. I wouldn’t even know where to start.”
“Well then, it’s a good thing I do. Meet me here tomorrow and we’ll start.”
She disappeared before he could even answer. He looked around, but she was nowhere. Austin shrugged. He would be at the library the next day anyway, maybe he would be able to ask more about what she wanted…and why him.
The next day, as the grandfather clock rang eleven, the woman tapped Austin on the shoulder.
Part 2 by Melanie:
“I’m glad you’re punctual!” the woman said. Austin shrugged. Years of military life had drummed that practice into him. He was never late. And to be honest Austin was intrigued. His precisely regulated life was beginning to gnaw at him. Sure, routine and order were important, but he had no idea they were so damned DULL.
Even though he’d lived such a life in his military service, there was always something to DO…some place to go, some orders to follow. As he rose in the ranks of the Army, eventually topping out at Colonel. His pension was substantial because he’d always given first rate service to his country. He was secretly really proud of this.
“Now about my story,” she began…but Austin interrupted her. “Might I know your name first?” he asked. She turned a little pale, but nodded. Hesitantly.
“I’m Rose,” she said and extended her hand to Austin. He shook it, noting that she had fine bones, he could feel them right through the white gloves she wore. A bit dated, a woman wearing gloves. Those hadn’t been the fashion since he was a boy in the 1950s he didn’t think. Austin wondered briefly why his thoughts kept rambling all over like they were…and he forced his mind back to the woman in front of him.
“I’m Austin” he replied, “and I’ve spent the greater portion of my life in the Army. They weren’t big on writing in the Army, at least not my branch. Only Administration ever did much of that! Are you sure you want me to tell your story?”
Rose smiled. It was wistful and rather sad. “Yes I’m sure,” she said. “I KNOW you’re the right one to tell my tale.” Austin noted the powder blue suit and skirt Rose was wearing, and the hat with the netting and little blue flowers across the brim. Again it struck him that her clothes looked really dated and out of place. Man, she really reminded him of someone….
Part 3 by Fandango:
Haunted by Rose’s manner and attire, and how she felt simultaneously strange and familiar to him, Austin went home that night, went up to the attic, and located his mother’s old scrapbooks. She had been the family archivists when she was still living and had meticulously placed old family photographs and documents, including birth certificates, marriage licenses, and obituaries, in dozens of scrapbooks.
After his mother passed, he had all of her scrapbooks boxed up and shipped to him at his home in the Catskills. He had never bothered opening the boxes and sorting through them before. But there was something about this woman who had seemed to approach him from out of the blue, told him that she had a story to tell, and that he was the one to tell it. None of it made sense to Austin.
He spent hours opening up the boxes and searching through the scrapbooks, not even understanding what, exactly, he was expecting to find. But he felt compelled to do so.
It was sometime after 3 am, his eyelids growing heavy and his mind weary, when Austin opened up the last scrapbook and began leafing through the pages. Suddenly he let out an audible gasp at what he saw on the page. Were his eyes deceiving him? Was his tired mind playing tricks on him? Was this even possible?
Part 4 by Michael
He was holding in his hand an old creased and faded photo of a group of people standing under an old Oak tree. Austin didn’t recognise any of the people in the photo apart from the woman on the end.
There stood Rose, a grin across her face and her arm around a good-looking man in his work clothes. The others in the photo all stared towards the camera and Austin could see they were a happy lot of people.
He turned the photo over to see if there was anything written on the back. In faded pen he could make out September, 1919, Horsefold. The name Horsefold did ring a bell with him and he scurried back through the scrapbooks until he found a series of photos depicting the family on holidays at Horsefold. From what he could find Horsefold was a popular family destination and in the post world war one environment the place where great colourful and loud parties were held. The Rose in the photos looked the same age as the Rose he had encountered. But how could this be? She’d have to be over one hundred years of age by now if it was the same person.
He determined that the next day he would seek her out and show her the photo and try and get some answers.
Part 5 by Di
‘Ah, I wondered if you’d find it,’ Rose said looking at the worn photograph Austin had handed her. She seemed to know he’d be looking for her and now they were sipping lattes in the library coffee shop. Rose was relishing hers.
‘How did you know I’d have it?’ Austin asked. ‘You don’t know me from Adam, though I must admit you are vaguely familiar but I can’t figure out why! Is that you in the picture? Are you a member of my family? How come you haven’t aged?’
Rose smiled sadly.
‘That is my great grandmother. They say I look like her. The man is your great grandfather, but they weren’t married.’
Austin didn’t understand.
Rose went on to explain that her great grandmother was The Lady of the Manor at Horsefold and having lost her entire family in the hostilities, had opened her home to the less fortunate to have a family holiday after the war. She enjoyed having the laughter and gaity of children around, and her grounds were sufficient to provide treasure hunts and other activities for all ages. She had become taken with the young man visiting one summer and they had plans to marry.
Then tragedy struck in 1922.
Part 6 by Iain Kelly
Austin couldn’t believe what he was hearing as Rose told him of the events that unfolded all those decades ago.‘The fire that ripped through Horsefold Manor in 1922 destroyed the building. All that was left was a burnt out shell. The windows and doors were boarded up and the ruin stood there for another forty years before it was demolished,’ she paused. ‘But that wasn’t the worst of it. On the day of the fire children from the local orphanage were visiting the Manor. Fifteen in total. They were playing ‘Hide and Seek’ when the fire started on the ground floor. Ten children managed to escape.’
‘And the other five?’ Austin already knew what the answer would be.
‘The inferno was so hot that only fragments of remains were found.’ Rose sighed and continued. ‘The cause of the fire was never determined. No one was ever charged with any crime. Five graves were added to the cemetery in the village churchyard, near to the orphanage. And that was the end of the Manor. My Great Grandmother moved into a small house in another parish, met my Great Grandfather and they lived out their days in humble surroundings. She never saw your Great Grandfather again after that day.’
‘Why do I feel their is something more you have to tell me?’
Rose pointed at the young man – Austin’s Great Grandfather – in the photograph. ‘He was there on the day of the fire at Horsefold Manor.’
‘Did he survive?’ Austin asked.
A puzzled look crossed Austin’s face, ‘Unfortunately?’
‘Rumours persisted about the fire that day. Many blamed your Great Grandfather. You see, he was in the military in World War One, fighting for his homeland, Germany. He was badly injured at Ypres and taken prisoner. When the war ended he eventually emigrated to America, where he volunteered at the orphanage in Horsefold and there met my Great Grandmother.’
‘They blamed him because he was German?’
Rose shook her head. ‘The war had left him damaged. These days we would call it Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder. Things he had witnessed corroded his mind, corrupted him, made him unable to see evil from good. After the fire he fled. I’ve managed to track his movements in the years that followed.’
She took out a piece of paper from her handbag. It showed a list of places dotted around America. Next to the place names was another column, with a date and a name in it.
‘What does this mean?’ asked Austin.
‘This is a list of all the children he murdered.’
My Contribution from James Pyles at Powered By Robots
Austin gazed at the list of five names, the five murdered children, penned on a scrap of paper yellowed with age. He didn’t recognize any of them, but then he didn’t expect to. “You said you wanted me to write your story, but you’re telling me about my Great Grandparents.” The retired Army Colonel, dressed in his usual flannel shirt and jeans, short salt and pepper hair framing a well-worn face, spoke to Rose who was still dressed like a woman out of time, a refugee from another era.
She didn’t look older than thirty-five, but there was something about her eyes, as if they’d seen the fall of Rome, the sails of the Niña, the Pinta, and the Santa Maria disappearing over the Atlantic’s horizon, the Conestoga wagon trains as they departed Independence, Missouri on their treacherous journey westward. But then, what about Horsefold and the fire? Had she seen that, too?
Rose sighed, her chest rising and falling within the silken lace of her blouse and the tailored powder blue jacket. White gloved hands clutched at her tiny handbag on her lap as the shadow of her wide-brimmed hat fell across her face. Long eyelashes fluttered across ocean-colored irises, and full, crimson lips pursed. “Austin, I haven’t been entirely honest with you.”
“In what manner?” He’d seen combat, led men into battle, faced death a score of times, and yet whatever secret Rose possessed frightened him more than any enemy’s rifles and artillery, more than any horror of war.
“Honestly, I was hoping you’d have guessed by now. How can any two people born a century apart be so identical in appearance?”
“I didn’t know who he was at the time, not really. I carry not only the guilt of those five children with me, but the disgust of having consorted with a man so dreadfully evil, the man I have been hunting for countless centuries. I gave birth to his children and so I bear a certain amount of his shame. I know you won’t believe me, but I am the Rose in that photo, and if you will, I’m a good deal older than a century or even ten. I am a hunter. Like me, your Great Grandfather is an immortal, but unlike me, he is murderous and insane. The deaths of those five dear little children are the least of the crimes he’s committed across the ages. I need your help, Austin. He’s here, somewhere in New York. We have to find him, to stop him, or countless others will die starting with your grandchildren.”
“But I don’t have any children, let alone…” Then he stopped talking and Austin’s eyes opened wide with panic..
Part 8 from willowdot21
What is it Rose, asked studying Austin’s face. Shifting uneasily in his chair Austin looked her full in the eye and replied, how can he kill my children, and grandchildren, let alone my great grandchildren when I have never had or wanted any children.
Rose still sat quietly just watching Austin. Her eyes widened with horror as his last few words sank in. “Are you sure,” Rose asked “that you have no children?” “I am indeed” replied Austin.
Rose took a deep breath and then slowly said that somehow she had made a mistake and that she had obviously approached him in error.
Standing up Rose made to leave, Austin reached across and caught her arm. “Were are you going” he asked her gently. “I have already wasted two weeks approaching you I must get on I must find him! “
Austin looked deep into Roses eyes and he saw only beauty and kindness, he reached out and touched her cheek and said “Rose I am going to help you find this immortal. I may be a mere man but I see only good in you so I am ready to help in anyway I can.”
Rose smiled, it looked like she was about to turn him down when suddenly she took a deep breath and said. “Thank you Austin I would really like that”
They decided to have dinner at Austin’s house and he would show Rose all his mother’s photos and family records. Rose closed her eyes for a moment and thought, maybe this kind brave man could help her. Goodness knows she needed help and she was so lonely there had been no one special in her life for at least 75years.
Rose smiled at Austin as they looked through the old photos and thought “I feel a true connection with this man.”
Part 9 by Kat
Austin glanced at Rose who seemed to thoroughly enjoy looking at his mother’s photo albums. He couldn’t help feeling agitated. There was more to her story. The fact that she hadn’t been totally honest with him in the beginning made him uneasy. In fact he had more questions now than ever.
“I’m gonna grab a beer. You want one? Or a coke? I have some in the ‘frig. Some bottled water too.”
“Nothing for me,” chirped Rose, who was happily flipping through the photos.
“I promised you dinner, Rose. I’m a pretty decent cook. What can I whip up for us?”
“Oh Austin, how very sweet of you, but as I mentioned, I’m an immortal. I dine on, you might say, more exotic fare. Fix something for yourself.”
Austin didn’t feel hungry anymore. He took a long swig of brew and sat in the easy chair facing Rose.
“I guess it’s time to get down to business then. You said I can help. So tell me Rose, how do we stop this so-called maniac?”
Rose looked up from the photos in her lap. “I’m afraid that’s going to take some thought, Austin. You see, I have no idea why he is raging. Usually it is the children who draw him out. And since you said you have none, I’m not quite sure…unless…”
“Unless it is you that he is after…”
Her words hung eerily in the air as the lights flickered briefly, then snapped to darkness.
A deep voice echoed from the hallway, “Hello Rosie, old girl. It’s been too long, hasn’t it? You didn’t think I was going to let you have him all to yourself, did you?!”
I’m nominating Hayley at The Story Files.
August 31st, 2018 at 9:58 pm
Fantastic addition! Thanks for participating 🙂
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August 31st, 2018 at 9:59 pm
My pleasure! 😊
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September 1st, 2018 at 5:22 am
OMG that’s raised the bar Kat 💜💜
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September 1st, 2018 at 7:27 am
Muhahahaha! You know I love a good cliff hanger! 😱
September 1st, 2018 at 7:31 am
So do I 💜🌹🤗
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September 1st, 2018 at 6:20 pm
Holy Hells and Ominous Bells! Now this is storytelling! 😎🥀🥀🥀🥀🥀
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September 1st, 2018 at 6:49 pm
I hope my nominee picks up where I left off.
September 1st, 2018 at 7:11 pm
Right on. 😎🥀