
Valley of Forgotten Souls
They hide inside layers of second hand clothes,
loudly conversing with monsters and demons,
roaming the streets, their treasure in buggies,
nightmares in flesh, they come out every evening.
Calamity haunts them wherever they travel.
Long since abandoned, no family or kin.
Begging for pennies with no place to call home.
Survival’s a game that so few of them win.
Outcast, these destitute vagabonds rally,
warming their hands at makeshift barrel fires,
bedding down in dark alleys; shelters of cardboard,
no dreams of a future where they can retire.
Where is the hope for these life-burdened souls?
Untreated insanity rattles their brains.
Could they be angels, to test our compassion,
or are they just people with forgotten names?
~kat
Almost didn’t make it in time for this week’s MindLoveMisery’sMenagerie Sunday Writing Prompt. But an encounter with a homeless man, screaming obscenities as he shuffled behind a shopping cart loaded with refuse and cardboard, gave me my heartbreaking inspiration. The prompt was to choose a title to write about. I chose “Valley of Forgotten Souls”. The photo is by Miriam’s-Fotos at Pixabay.com




November 18th, 2017 at 11:33 pm
Loved this.
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November 19th, 2017 at 12:11 am
Thank you. ❤️
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November 19th, 2017 at 12:56 am
Such an apt and poignant use of the title, really gut-wrenching
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November 19th, 2017 at 9:10 am
Thank you. The encounter that inspired it left me feeling so frustrated that there was nothing I could do immediately to assuage his suffering, and heartache. 😢
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November 19th, 2017 at 6:11 am
I found this piece moving and powerful – an important reminder of those people who can seem marginal, insignificant.
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November 19th, 2017 at 10:30 am
Riveting.
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November 19th, 2017 at 3:29 pm
My heart breaks for these lost souls. 😢
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