
Once upon a time…you know where this is going. You might even think, this is one of those ‘fairy tales’ and dismiss it straight away as a myth, but I can assure you it is truer than true. For it is true that everything in this world has a once upon a time; even you, if you think about it, when you burst purple, wet into this place, gulping your first breath, eyes squinting at the bright glare of life.
And so it was for Clarissa. Born in a humble wisteria-draped cottage in a dingle village long, long ago, Clarissa emerged from the Guf laughing, eyes wide and bright. The midwife declared, “My my, but this is a special one!” Never had a truer thing been uttered, as time would tell.
As soon as she could walk, Clarissa set about exploring every cranny and nook. Birds and bugs, whirlygigs, cottonwood fluff and witch’s gowan wishies…flying things, were her favorite things of all. She spent hours studying them, quite unusual for a youngster, and gibbering to them about this and that, as if they were listening. She dreamed of flying like her airborne friends. One day she did. It was the saddest of all days the dingle had ever known.
On that dark and dreadful day Clarissa managed to escape the watchful eyes of her doting mum to wander up the mountain trail to the lookout ledge. She stood there for a moment, feet clinging to the rocky crag, arms extended, her fiery red curls dancing in the wind, and she laughed so loudly it caught the attention of every living thing below. They watched aghast as Clarissa lept into a swooping gust and flew for a short, too few magnificent seconds.
Frantic to save her, every winged, wispy thing surrendered their feathers and wings, whirligigs and fluffy, puff wishies to the wind, hoping to break her fall her by blanketing the dingle in feathery fluff, but they were no match for gravity’s power, drifting helplessly in the air. Clarissa fell right through them, landing in a horrible thud as the last echo of her laughter faded in the distance.
Now you may not notice it when it happens but I can assure you it’s true. Every time a child laughs a bird sheds a feather or bug its wings. And sometimes Maple tree whirligigs, cottonwood fluffies and dandelion wishies take to the wind too. All to remember Clarissa, the girl who dreamed of flying, and to add another moment’s wonder and happiness to children everywhere. For it is also true that their magnificent innocence, like Clarissa’s ill-fated flight, fades far too quickly, like echoes of laughter in the distance.
~kat
A Folktale for Jane Dougherty Microfiction Challenge inspired by Jeren of itsallaboutnothing’s poem that you can read HERE.




August 12th, 2017 at 9:37 pm
That must have been a rude fall for Clarissa, but then again a girl can dream. Cute tale 🙂
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August 12th, 2017 at 9:45 pm
Innocence lost is a rude fall from grace, but grace remains still. ❤️
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August 13th, 2017 at 3:34 am
A cautionary tale, but I think the message is for us rather than naughty children—be curious, learn to understand the living things around us and to treasure them. Clarissa just didn’t have time to finish her education…
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August 13th, 2017 at 7:53 am
I believe all tales should hold messages for big kids…
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August 13th, 2017 at 9:40 am
If more big kids read stories and listened to the message, they might learn something.
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August 13th, 2017 at 10:36 am
Yes indeed! 😊
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August 13th, 2017 at 10:40 am
🙂
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August 13th, 2017 at 8:32 am
Very nice story.
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August 13th, 2017 at 8:52 am
Thank you Frank. 😊
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August 13th, 2017 at 9:25 am
This is delightful Kat, not sad at all because Clarissa had a dream and fulfilled it, and all the Once upon a times remember the dream with fondness!
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August 13th, 2017 at 10:38 am
Every life…every once upon a time has a legacy. ❤️
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August 14th, 2017 at 10:57 am
Another Phenomenal children’s book this would make. 🌺🌺🌺🌺🌺
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August 14th, 2017 at 9:33 pm
I have a thought to round up a collection of my fairy-ish tales. That would be fun. Also have thought about the ReVerses…Life in ReVerse…or something like that. 😉
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August 15th, 2017 at 12:09 pm
Oh absolutely, either I am certain would make for Fantastic readings for All ages. 🙂
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August 15th, 2017 at 1:10 pm
😊
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August 14th, 2017 at 2:10 pm
The poor mother, Clarissa wasn’t old enough to know better it seems to know the consequences of trying to flylike a bird. I like how you made this fairytale like but in a pre-Disney way when fairytales often had bad ending. But like your tale, these endings serve as a warning and have the involvement of fairies and winged animals as Snow White’s story does. Beautifully written
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August 14th, 2017 at 9:30 pm
Thanks Mandi. It is true, even the loveliest fairytales of old had a dark side. 🙂
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August 17th, 2017 at 3:07 pm
Hi Kat, how are you doing? I’m wondering if you would allow me to send you interview questions. I may have asked you already so let me know if I did. Sorry for my horrible memory in that case.
If I haven’t, I’d love to send you Writer/blogger interview questions now and feature you on my blog and the Go DOg Go Cafe. Both will be the same interview. Let me know. You can email me at mandi_ae@hotmail.com if you’re interested.
Thanks,
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