
Today was The Great Unveiling. Crorrarq glanced at himself in the mirror. It had been seven years since the occupation. Seven years of blending in under a layer of celluloid, masking his true nature. Crorrarq was one of millions.
The Elders had vehemently opposed the event. “It’s much too soon. We’ve been observing these humans,” they said. “How can we expect to be accepted for who we are when they don’t even accept their own? You’ve seen them. Building their walls, hoarding their riches from the poorest of their kind. Killing each other for money and resources. Turning away those who are weak or different. No,” they warned, “humans are far too barbaric and uncivilized to accept us as neighbors.”
But the decision was made. Votes were cast. The Great Unveiling would go on as planned.
At noon on that fateful day every alien on the planet revealed themself to the humans they had grown to love and who claimed to love them. It was a dreadful day. The humans saw only monsters where once they saw friends. Every alien was rounded up, imprisoned and ultimately executed.
The Elders had been right all along. It was much too soon.
~kat
(199 Words)
For Sunday’s Photo Fiction Challenge based on this photo by our host Al.




May 31st, 2017 at 11:48 pm
Reblogged this on Yuri Borysov and commented:
Looks Danger…….
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June 1st, 2017 at 7:10 am
Thank you for the reblog Yuri. 😊
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June 1st, 2017 at 3:22 am
Thanks for introducing a new challenge to me Kat. Nice take.
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June 1st, 2017 at 6:56 am
You’re welcome Di. Al gives us 200 words to play with. Still a challenge but you get to develop your story a bit more. 😊
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June 1st, 2017 at 6:57 am
I’m looking forward to the next one.
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June 5th, 2017 at 5:36 am
I look forward to seeing what you produce 🙂
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June 5th, 2017 at 6:23 am
Thanks. This one was a challenge! 😊
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June 5th, 2017 at 10:07 am
Thank you. I love the diversity of the challenges available.
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June 3rd, 2017 at 6:21 pm
Yikes! Such a tragedy, u know humanity and it’s supposed evolution. 😇😈
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June 4th, 2017 at 9:14 am
I find you tale so simple, and so clear sighted- sci-fi and sort of parable of our times. Impressive I think.
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June 5th, 2017 at 5:38 am
That sounds about right as to what humans would do to aliens. How can we have a tolerance for something outside of the planet when we won’t stop fighting ourselves. Good story Kat .
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June 5th, 2017 at 6:21 am
Thanks Al. It is a sad reality. 😟
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