
photo by Rachel Crowe
It was fashioned of brushed brass, clicking cogs, and black dials and numbers set on an ivory face, a treasure passed from generation to generation, to the eldest son, as was customary in their family.
But because the current generation had produced no male heirs, the family’s patriarch had arranged for the pocket watch to be locked in a vault for safe keeping until the next male progeny was born…except…this was the 21st Century and there were three daughters waiting in the wings.
Members of the family petitioned the old man to consider the eldest of the three, an accomplished, intelligent young woman, to be the next owner of the watch, and he, after careful consideration and a twinkle in his eye as he gazed intently into hers, exclaimed, “Well hell, why not!” embracing his favorite girl sealing the deal; and a dusty old tradition was shattered by an antique, just like that!
kat ~ 25 August 2016
In response to Sonya’s Three Line Tale Challenge based on this photo by Rachel Crowe.




August 25th, 2016 at 12:30 pm
Love!
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August 25th, 2016 at 12:32 pm
Thank you! I am hoping this is the decade when many old traditions (and glass ceilings) are shattered once and for all! 😉
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August 25th, 2016 at 12:34 pm
Yes indeed! I have the same hope! 🙂
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August 25th, 2016 at 12:54 pm
🙂
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August 25th, 2016 at 3:17 pm
Hi Kat,
I’ve just read your story and I’m in love with it. The flow of sentences, connectivity and then old tradion was shattered, it’s all beautiful 🙂
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August 25th, 2016 at 3:19 pm
Thank you Madeeha! 😊
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September 4th, 2016 at 5:30 pm
Thank you so much! I’m sorry for the late reply. I just found a bunch of comments in my spam folder. 😊
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September 5th, 2016 at 12:24 am
My pleasure,no worries it happens at times
Regards
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August 25th, 2016 at 5:23 pm
This is great! I love it!
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September 4th, 2016 at 5:22 pm
Thank you so much! Sorry for the late response. For some reason WP sent your comment to my spam folder. Need to check it more often.
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September 4th, 2016 at 5:22 pm
Thank you so much! Sorry for the late response. For some reason WP sent your comment to my spam folder. Need to check it more often.
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September 4th, 2016 at 5:41 pm
That seems to happening to me a lot.😕
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August 25th, 2016 at 6:33 pm
Nice. I liked this take. Like the British Monarchy, allowing a first born heir who is female, to be Queen 🙂
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August 25th, 2016 at 7:02 pm
Yes! Another good thing! 🙂
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August 25th, 2016 at 9:34 pm
I was first confused by the challenge, as I saw there were many more than three lines in the story. Then DUH! Three sentences (lines)! LOL, and of course any monitor or website could break them into all kinds of lines. I am ready for Friday. 😀
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August 25th, 2016 at 9:34 pm
Oh and great three line story, too!
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August 25th, 2016 at 9:39 pm
🙂
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September 4th, 2016 at 5:26 pm
Thanks! 😊
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August 25th, 2016 at 9:39 pm
Haha! I often stuck to exactly three lines in the form of a haiku for this challenge. But I wanted to tell more of a story…a run-on sentence writer’s dream! 😀
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August 26th, 2016 at 6:34 am
Amazing! Break free of all the gender biased traditions😀
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August 26th, 2016 at 6:43 am
Yes! It is time for change in the world!
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September 4th, 2016 at 5:26 pm
I agree!
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August 26th, 2016 at 5:29 pm
A fabulous story telling! 😉
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August 26th, 2016 at 5:43 pm
Thank you Dorna! 😊
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September 4th, 2016 at 5:23 pm
Thank you Dorna! Catching up here! 😊
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September 4th, 2016 at 5:25 pm
Thanks Dorna! 🙂
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