meaninglessness
your apologies flow like bitter mantras
lacking all sincerity
obliterating us
~kat
Kimo poems are an Israeli version of haiku. Apparently, there was a need for more syl lables in Hebrew. That said, most of the rules are still familiar:
• 3 lines.
• No rhymes.
• 10 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second, and 6 in the third.
Also, the kimo is focused on a single frozen image (kind of like a snapshot). So it’s uncommon to have any movement happening in kimo poems.




June 24th, 2023 at 6:32 am
I know such people.
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June 24th, 2023 at 6:38 am
Sadly, I think we all do. 🥺
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June 24th, 2023 at 8:04 am
🤗
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June 24th, 2023 at 10:08 am
🤗 … hey Sadje…it’s all good…fiction…just a poem 🥰
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June 24th, 2023 at 10:10 am
Good to know Kat.
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