
Oh, surely I knew
you’d be trouble when we met.
Yet, despite every warning
mornings have never been as sweet,
complete, as they are with you.
True, you had me at first glance,
chance tossed our souls
whole into passion’s fire.
Desire never fading,
jading me against anyone new…
too late now to let you go.
Oh, surely I knew!
kat – 16 September 2016
I blame this sappy Circular poem on the full, harvest, penumbral lunar eclipsing moon this afternoon. 😉 I jest. It is actually written in response to Jane Dougherty’s Poetry Challenge to write a Circular Poem on circles, cycles, seasons, life. (A circular poem is written by repeating the first line again at the end, and along the way, having the last word of each line rhyme with the first word of the next).
About this poem…Having fallen for a few “wrong” types in my life, I have learned that I am painfully hesitant when it comes to making things right and moving on. I get caught in a spiraling spin, in, then out, then back in love with the wrong person who feels so right! Of course I am an expert at justifying each lapse. I can only imagine how many breaths I’ve wasted! But some memories do make for good stories. Also, I must say, I’ve learned about people, and most importantly, about myself through each ill-fated encounter.
At any rate. Enjoy. The moon will be phasing into its eclipse soon. I’m thinking perhaps I should stay away from the keyboard! 🙂 (or maybe I best stay glued to it! Who knows what lunacy lurks on a day such as this! :))




September 16th, 2016 at 1:56 pm
Lunar lunacy…sometimes, it can be fun!
😉
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September 16th, 2016 at 2:05 pm
Yes it can indeed! 🙂 Have a great weekend!
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September 16th, 2016 at 2:07 pm
Very sweet poem 🙂
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September 16th, 2016 at 2:57 pm
Thanks Mandi! 😊
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September 16th, 2016 at 3:25 pm
It sounds as though you need to visit the grandkids over the eclipse. Keep you in check 🙂
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September 16th, 2016 at 3:44 pm
Ah! That is a wonderful idea! I’ve been under the weather for weeks. Takes its toll! 🤒
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September 16th, 2016 at 4:19 pm
Truly marvelous!
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September 16th, 2016 at 8:57 pm
Great circular poem! I don’t know if it’s supposed to be read both forwards and backwards but that’s what I did and it worked really nice! I was without internet and cable for 12 hours yesterday, so was only able to do word games on my phone, lol! All is working now. 🙂
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September 16th, 2016 at 8:59 pm
Wow! Now I have to go back and read it backwards! I didn’t plan it. Haha! Still sick. Taking it easy tonight. 😊
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September 16th, 2016 at 9:02 pm
Oh no, so sorry to hear that Kat! Sending healing thoughts! xoxoxo
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September 16th, 2016 at 9:06 pm
Thanks! Had hoped to visit baby Bexley this weekend. Won’t if I can’t kick this cough. It’s been going around the office. (Thanks Boss!) Lasts a couple of weeks. Should be seeing the end of it soon!😷
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September 16th, 2016 at 9:08 pm
I hope so! What did you think of the poem backwards?
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September 16th, 2016 at 9:09 pm
It was wild! Thanks for pointing that out to me! 😉
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September 20th, 2016 at 3:49 am
[…] hate loving you | like mercury colliding… […]
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September 20th, 2016 at 4:16 am
This is fab!
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September 20th, 2016 at 6:17 am
Thanks Sarah! 😊
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September 20th, 2016 at 7:40 am
Very sweet. Oh, that moon! 🙂
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September 20th, 2016 at 9:02 am
Yes, it was a powerful one this month! 😉
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