Note: This little story started in response to Jane Dougherty’s Microfiction Challenge. I do enjoy the continued influence of her weekly prompts and paintings. It is pure synchronicity that they always blend right into the narrative. But please forgive me for not following the rules. I am clearly coloring outside the box here or rather, spilling over the word count limit. That said, this is not a true entry for this week’s prompt, but I hope to continue tagging along as this story progresses. The image this week is by Henri Rousseau. It’s not a perfect fit, however the theme is spot on. I may write a separate 200 word story as well. But for those of you following this one…I give you Seasoning – Part 9. You can read previous installments HERE.

Painting by Henri Rouseau – Un matin de pluie (One Rainy Morning)
“Abandoned”
Hannah woke to the fluttering trill of birdsong. She peered out the window to see mist hovering in patches over the garden while the sun glowed red behind the trees bordering the horizon. It reminded her of a story from her childhood. “All birds sing in the morning, each one checking in with the others to let them know they have survived the night.”
Hannah pursed her lips and chirped softly, “Peep, peep, peep. I too survived the night my little friends.”
She splashed cool water on her face, pulled her hair into a twist and dressed in a simple a-lined dress topped with a loose fitting jumper.
The house was quiet so Hannah took the opportunity to explore. Next to the kitchen she found a pantry, a closet with cleaning tools and a mud room with laundry area and shelves with garden tools and clay pots.
Back in the kitchen, she assembled the coffee pot. While it brewed, Hannah gathered butter from the icebox, several fresh eggs from a blue ceramic bowl on the counter and bread for toasting.
“I see you’re finding your way around Hannah! Ah, fresh coffee. My favorite thing to wake up to!”
“Yes Ma’am! Good morning! How do you take your eggs? By the way, I love this kitchen!”
“Well you know what they say, the kitchen is the heart of a home, and Alice, well, she loved to cook, loved this kitchen.” Helen paused, tears welling in the corners of her eyes. “Poached, I take my eggs poached.” She dabbed the tears from her cheeks and sipped coffee while Hannah prepared poached eggs and toast to perfection.
“Oh, this is delicious! Now have a seat Hannah. I’ve written a schedule for you and numbers for the market, pharmacy, butcher, doctor, and the Gordons who live next door. That’s where you can get more of those eggs. Mrs. Gordon, Margery, told me to tell you to call or stop by anytime. She’s a bit of a talker, but a very nice woman.”
“Will Mr. Chambers be joining us for breakfast?”
The front door slammed. “Well there’s our answer! Honestly Hannah, I’m so sorry he’s being such…ugh! He just infuriates me so!” Helen tapped her fingertips on the table, “We need a plan. I want you to prepare breakfast and dinner each day, whether he eats it or not. Set a place at the table.”
“But what if he leaves it to spoil?”
“You’re going to need good compost for that garden of yours. Just consider it food for the flowers! Now, I know that I said I planned to stay until you got settled in, but I’m afraid I am needed back up north. Our dear Aunt Millie has taken ill. You understand.”
“You’re leaving? But I just got here! What if I…I’m sorry, of course, I understand.”
“It’s all spelled out Hannah. I took great care to list every detail.” Helen tapped the instructions on the table. “Of course you can call me and Margery is next door. I do hope you’ll manage to find time for that garden. Spring is just around the corner! Not to worry, I’ll be back in a few months to check on you.”
“Yes Ma’am. When are you leaving?”
“This afternoon. The train leaves in four hours.”




September 7th, 2016 at 3:28 pm
I hope she tells Hannah to keep that compost turned over or she’s going to get rats. I’m getting an idea of Jane Eyre and Mr Rochester here. Can we have a bit of a description of Henry sometime, please? Debonair, handsome, with some greying at the temples? Dark, brooding eyes?
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September 7th, 2016 at 3:49 pm
Wonderful suggestion! I think it’s time for Hannah to size him up! 😉
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September 7th, 2016 at 3:53 pm
I try to clear all considerations out of my thoughts when I pick a new image, but it’s going to be difficult not choosing an illustration from a Victorian melodrama now 🙂
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September 7th, 2016 at 5:58 pm
Truly, another spellbinding addition to your story.
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September 7th, 2016 at 7:02 pm
It is moving along nicely. I love this story! 😊
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September 7th, 2016 at 8:20 pm
I see Henry as the Grumpy Old Man in the movie UP, lol! Well Hannah certainly has her work cut out for her now!
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September 7th, 2016 at 8:30 pm
Yes she does! 😊
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September 8th, 2016 at 4:35 am
[…] Seasoning – Part 9 | like mercury colliding… […]
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September 8th, 2016 at 6:29 am
I sense trouble brewing…(K)
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September 8th, 2016 at 2:00 pm
This is magical. I love it!
I can’t believe Helen is leaving Hannah for months, although I think Henry is grumpy, but not actually mean. I could feel Hannah kind of gulping and panicking at the thought. 😉
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September 9th, 2016 at 3:23 pm
I love a good cliffhanger. Though it is plain to see that poor Hannah will have a time of it! 😉
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September 9th, 2016 at 5:38 pm
Yes, she will, but I think she’s strong. 🙂
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September 9th, 2016 at 5:44 pm
Yes…I agree! 😉
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September 14th, 2016 at 5:11 pm
Keeps getting more interesting. I love the description of the old fashioned Kitchen. And I enjoy how Henry’s sister is setting this up. It will be interesting when Henry and Hannah finally face off lol.
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