A Cascade Poem for Jane Dougherty’s poetry challenge, “Silent Cascade” prompted by the painting here and incorporating the following words: cascade, tresses, eagle, abandon, rippling. To learn more about the Cascade Poetry Form visit Shadow Poetry’s blogsite.
In the forest dark and deep
near an ancient rowan tree
she leans in so she can hear
faerie voices on the wind.
Faerie King has led her here
where the wood nymphs come to swim
twinkling on the rippling pools
in the forest dark and deep.
Overwhelming is the sound
of the cascade’s rushing din,
woodnote chatter, eagle shrieks,
near the ancient rowan tree.
Long shadowed ebon tresses
cloak the night as dew descends
muting sleepy earthen sounds
she leans in so she can hear.
Persevering to the end
with abandon, she prevails,
ever soft the twinkling bells
faerie voices on the wind.
kat ~ 3 June 2016
June 3rd, 2016 at 3:29 pm
What a magical first line! I love the imagery, especially the rowan tree and the deep, dark forest.
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June 3rd, 2016 at 3:33 pm
Thank you Jane. 🙂 When repeating a line from the first stanza throughout, I had to be sure I didn’t get ahead of myself, but also made the story work. It took a bit of tweaking, but I really do like this form. 🙂
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June 3rd, 2016 at 3:43 pm
It’s a good feeling of a job well done when the repeated lines make sense in a different context.
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June 3rd, 2016 at 4:58 pm
Yes! It truly is! 😊
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June 3rd, 2016 at 3:31 pm
Love this Kat!
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June 3rd, 2016 at 3:34 pm
Thank you Lynn! One of my favorite things…Faeries! 🙂
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June 4th, 2016 at 10:13 am
Thank you for introducing me to a cascade poem – how lovely!
PS. I’ve nominated your blog for the One Lovely Blog Award! https://practicallywise.wordpress.com/2016/06/04/fellow-lovelies/
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June 4th, 2016 at 10:52 am
You are most welcome! And thank you so much for the Lively Blog Award! I am honored! ❤️
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June 4th, 2016 at 12:49 pm
Love the mystical and magical qualities of this poem. Beautifully written!
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June 4th, 2016 at 2:14 pm
Thank you Mandi. I love the painting. So much story to tell!
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June 7th, 2016 at 5:38 am
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June 7th, 2016 at 6:00 am
Magical. This has an old ballad feel to it with the fairies and rowan tree.
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June 7th, 2016 at 7:34 am
Thank you Merril. Rowan tree is so much more poetic than simply saying Ash tree! 😊
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June 7th, 2016 at 7:35 am
Yes, it is! 🙂
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