
The woods are lovely, dark and deep
Deep in thought I wander there
There to find sweet solitude
solitude from worldly cares.
Worldly cares that rob my soul
soul swept weary, jumbled mind
mind uncluttered free to be
be…and lose myself from time.
Time will pass though I won’t care
Care to join me, take the leap?
Leap carefree into the woods…
the woods are lovely, dark and deep.
kat ~ 21 January 2016
I have been wanting to try a “chain” poem style after having read one recently. Basically, you start each line with the last word or short phrase from the previous line. This is my first go at it, while also responding to Jane Dougherty’s latest poetry challenge…Take a favourite line from a song, verse, book, etc., and feature it in a poem. The line I chose is from the poem Stopping By The Woods on a Snowy Evening by Robert Frost. (I found the photo featured here at Inspire Leads). With winter and impending snow looming this weekend, I am in a wintry frame of mind! If you would like to ready other poems or enter your own, please click HERE.




January 21st, 2016 at 2:14 pm
I do like this Kat! Funnily enough I was reading Frost’s poem just an hour or so ago and working out the rhyming scheme. I love the way your poem hops and skips along, so bright and cheerful.
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January 21st, 2016 at 2:15 pm
Thank you Jane. I wasn’t going to rhyme at first, but then thought it sounded better launching off of Frost…rhyming the 2nd and 4th lines. 🙂
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January 21st, 2016 at 3:12 pm
Nicely crafted.
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January 21st, 2016 at 3:22 pm
Thanks! First time trying this form. I want to give it a little more practice. 🙂
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January 21st, 2016 at 3:38 pm
Lovely, Kate. I’m glad you used rhyme – great way to follow Frost.
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January 21st, 2016 at 3:39 pm
Thank you Oneta. I do like the musical quality of rhyme. 🙂
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January 22nd, 2016 at 10:47 am
Beautiful poem and nicely done!
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January 22nd, 2016 at 10:51 am
Thank you PJ! 🙂 I want to try another chain style poem. I like the concept of repeating a word from last in the previous line to first in the next. It’s very contemplative. 🙂
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January 22nd, 2016 at 11:39 am
When you said it was a chain poem, I went back and looked and really liked it too! I have never heard of that kind of poem before but I sure liked yours!
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January 22nd, 2016 at 11:43 am
Thanks! I want to try a few more 😊
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January 22nd, 2016 at 11:50 am
I look forward to reading them!
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January 22nd, 2016 at 11:06 am
Well done.
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January 22nd, 2016 at 11:09 am
Thank you for taking a moment to comment! 🙂
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January 26th, 2016 at 4:23 am
[…] Into the Woods […]
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January 26th, 2016 at 6:19 am
Wonderful job. This is a favorite poem, and you did such a great spin on it.
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January 26th, 2016 at 6:55 am
Thank you Merril. You can’t go wrong with Frost. I had good bones to work with! 😊
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