Photo Credit: Dale Rogerson
“Someone really should move that old chair.”
“Yeah, well, I aint touchin’ it! My Gran’ says it could be haunted or cursed. I aint touchin’ it!”
“Stupid dare. I wouldn’t a rode a chair down that hill for nothin’. I heard she hit her head on a rock and that was that. Oh, and I don’t believe in ghosts, but someone ought to move that chair. It’s just creepy to think about her dying here and all.
“We could always fish on the other side of the pond.”
“Naw…best fishin’ is here. Stupid girl! Hey! I got a bite!”
~ kat ~ 28 October 2015
(98 Words)
Another great 100 Word writing prompt from Rochelle at Friday Fictioneers! If you’d like to read other stories and join the challenge click HERE.
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October 28th, 2015 at 12:34 pm
LOVE!!! That is all I can say, oh ok I love how you use that accent so well. It takes me there!!!
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October 28th, 2015 at 12:39 pm
Thanks Lynn! Practice, practice this fiction writing thing. I am loving it! 🙂
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October 28th, 2015 at 1:03 pm
it is awesome!
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October 28th, 2015 at 1:16 pm
🙂
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October 28th, 2015 at 2:14 pm
I’m not looking forward to him landing his catch. Nicely done.
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October 28th, 2015 at 2:35 pm
How easily life goes on when death is seen as a burden! 😊
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October 28th, 2015 at 3:09 pm
Dang chair… all in the way and all…
Great story!
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October 28th, 2015 at 3:57 pm
Thanks Dale! I know…right?!
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October 28th, 2015 at 5:12 pm
There is saying the eels will be the main catch.
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October 28th, 2015 at 5:15 pm
I have not heard that saying before Bjorn. What does it mean?
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October 28th, 2015 at 5:47 pm
Eels is said to feed on corpses
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October 28th, 2015 at 6:28 pm
Ah ok. That makes sense. Eww!
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October 28th, 2015 at 6:25 pm
Dear Kat,
I’m afraid of what he’s going to pull out. Good story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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October 28th, 2015 at 6:29 pm
Thanks Rochelle! I hadn’t even thought of that but a few of you all did!
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October 28th, 2015 at 8:41 pm
Loved the ending! And WHAT a story! Brilliant and scary story, Kat!
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October 28th, 2015 at 9:33 pm
Thanks Dreamer! I think it must be the season! 😉
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October 29th, 2015 at 3:09 am
I hope they’re not using the corpse as ground bait.
Good piece – I particularly like the way you penned the dialogue.
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October 29th, 2015 at 5:37 am
Thank you Mick! I hope not too! That would be gruesome!
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October 29th, 2015 at 9:32 am
Cool dialogue, cleverly built.
But I wouldn’t eat the fish!
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October 29th, 2015 at 9:38 am
I’m with you there! Thanks for the comment! 🙂
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October 29th, 2015 at 10:59 am
Great voices. I wonder what makes the fish thrive in this place… wouldn’t want to eat them either.
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October 29th, 2015 at 11:29 am
I’m with you! Thanks for the comment! 🙂
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October 30th, 2015 at 11:19 pm
Great story and dialogue. The fishermen didn’t see so much upset as amused at what happened. 🙂
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October 30th, 2015 at 11:25 pm
Yep… And annoyed that she spoiled their favorite fishing spot! 😊
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October 31st, 2015 at 3:33 pm
Ghosts in the water. Love it. I don’t want to see he caught either.
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October 31st, 2015 at 3:36 pm
Thanks Amy. I’m with you! 😊
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