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Corabelle and the Enchanted Tree

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This is the story of a very good girl named Corabelle. She was the most perfect daughter, sister and friend that a body could wish for. If ever anyone needed something, Corabelle was the first person they called, for she was exceedingly loyal and giving. To a fault, some might say, but it made her happy to serve. When others were happy, Corabelle was happy.

And so it went for years and years, until the day poor Corabelle found herself in need. A life of serving without stopping to care for herself had taken its toll. She cried for help to no avail.

“Who are you?” her friends and family all said, “I’m much too busy to help you today.”

After being rejected by nearly everyone she knew Corabelle was beginning to wonder too. “Who are you?” she asked herself. In her current state, with nothing to give, she felt useless.

She noticed an old woman carrying a bundle and begged her, “Please ma’am, I have no money to pay you, but I am so tired and hungry. Is there something you can spare, a bit of bread or fruit perhaps?”

“Oh dear girl, as you can see, I have nothing but these rags to keep the wind from nipping my weary bones, but I know a tree that grows at the edge of town. You will recognize it because it has no leaves, but one of every variety of fruit grows from its red branches.”

“How can that be? I’ve never heard of such a tree.”

“Oh, but you have. You yourself are like that tree. You have spent your life giving, being all things to all people. Your fruits have been many but you have lost yourself and are fading as we speak.”

“How do you know this?” Corabelle queried.

“The tree sent me to tell you. It heard your question.”

“My question?  Who are you?”

That is the question, “Who are you?” the old woman replied.

Corabelle thought it strange, but she was intrigued. “I should like to meet this tree,“  she said.

“Very well,” the old woman answered, pointing the way.

When Corabelle saw the tree, she was filled with deep compassion. It looked so overburdened with fruits of every kind hanging from its limbs. Just as the old woman said, it reminded her of herself. “What kind of tree are you?” Corabelle asked.

“I don’t know,” sighed the tree, “I don’t even know if I am a tree, or a vine, or a bush. If someone wished for an apple, I became a tree, or if another wanted a grape I became a vine. As you can see, I am twisted and wilting away to nothing, except for these heavy fruits clinging to my bare branches. And worst of all, no one wants my fruit anymore.”

“Well, I certainly do! I would love a piece of your fruit if you don’t mind!” Corabelle reached for the apple and snapped it from the tree.

In an instant, the other fruit fell from the branches and leaves sprouted every which way where there had been none. “Thank you Corabelle!” the tree exclaimed,”I remember who and what I am now. I am a tree, an apple tree to be exact.”

Corabelle smiled happily, taking a bite of the apple. For the first time in her life she felt what it was like to receive. It felt good. Not as good as giving, but very good indeed.

kat ~ 2 December 2016

A bit out of practice doing micro…so longer, but hopefully intriguing enough to keep one’s attention. This is my entry for Jane Dougherty’s Microfiction Challenge this week based on the illustration by Virginia Frances Sterret that you see above. Happy Friday to you.


Seasoning – Part 15

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“Far, far away Soria Moria Palace shimmered like Gold” Painting  by Theodore Kittelsen

Seasoning – Part 15

Eventually, Henry succumbed to exhaustion. He spiraled into a deep sleep, haunted once again by a familiar nightmare, where he found himself in sight of an elusive glowing city. But this time was very different. He was no longer a young boy but a man, his vantage point closer than it had ever been. In fact, he was actually standing on a cobbled road just a stone’s throw from the gate.

He looked down at his ash smudged hands and disheveled clothing. This journey had been a long and rigorous undertaking. But there, as he basked in the warm, golden glow of the city lights Henry was more convinced than ever that happiness resided beyond the gate because she was there.

Consumed by longing, he unconsciously wrestled with the bed covers. As he tossed between wakefulness and sleep they seemed to be the only thing keeping her from him. Finally, Henry cried out to her, his lover, his soulmate,“Hannah!”

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The full moon lingered mid-sky as the sun warmed the horizon, sending streams of amber light through wisps of fog. Mr. Gordon’s rooster crooned a lusty cock-a-doodle rousing Hannah from a sound sleep.

She had already dropped her feet to the floor when the rooster managed a final doodle-do. With breakfast to prepare, she quickly bathed, donned her working dress and smock, and rushed to the kitchen.

Hannah started to hum, hoping to quell the cacophony of images and emotions that swirled in her head. Just before waking she had experienced a most disturbing dream.

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Painting by Olav Johan Andreassen “Storm Night”

She and others were caught in a catastrophic flood. The force and depth of the water was so severe that it uprooted trees and dwellings scooping them up and tossing them miles away, along with animals and people too, who happened to be in its wake. The last thing Hannah remembered was being crushed and trapped under a boulder unable to free herself. There at her side was her lover who held her hand as he tried to comfort her. She felt herself fading, her heart breaking, as she looked away. He took her face in his hands, forcing her to look at him, begging her to stay. As the darkness closed in around her, his piercing eyes transformed from pale blue into Henry’s dark eyes,  his voice deepening into Henry’s voice,“I will always love you…I will always love you…”

Hannah stopped humming and frowned. “Impossible!” she said loudly, “I’ve lost my mind. I’m sure of it!”

“Well, I would be happy to help you find it, madam. Your mind that is. Though I find life to be quite delightful if one is able to manage with a few screws loose!”

Startled, Hannah turned, nearly crashing into him. “Oh my lord, you gave me such a fright! I was just getting ready to bring breakfast to the dining room.”

“Well. That, I can help you with!” Henry loaded several dishes, a basket of biscuits and the butter tray in his arms. “Don’t forget the coffee, Hannah. I’m certain that I would still be lazing between the sheets if not for its irresistible aroma this morning. By the way, I hope you fared better than me and got some sleep last night.”

“I’m afraid not,” Hannah lamented, as she followed him into the dining room, “and I had the most disturbing dream. I must remember not to eat a full meal so late at night.”

“Mmmmm, you may be right about that. What I can remember of my dreams last night, is that they were quite strange as well.” Henry bit off a huge corner of biscuit and guzzled a mouthful of coffee. With his mouth still full, he queried, “What are your plans for today, Hannah?”

“Well, there is Helen’s list…”

Henry rolled his eyes, shaking his head as he leaned back in his chair with his arms crossed over his chest. Hannah giggled.

When she regained her composure she continued, “As I was saying, there is the list,” she flashed a coy smile raising a single eyebrow toward Henry, daring him to tease her again, “and then I plan to begin work in the garden.”

“It sounds like a busy schedule. I plan to have a grounds keeping service come to remove the trees that got destroyed last night. While they are here, feel free to employ them to do any heavy lifting you have planned. I also want you to find time to go downtown to the tailor shop. Jonathan Stephens, the proprietor, is a personal friend, as well as the best suit and dressmaker in town. I couldn’t help noticing last night that the fire and rain ruined your lovely dress. The very least I can do is replace it.” Henry’s face softened as he remembered how lovely she had looked.

“Thank you. That is most generous of you,” Hannah blushed, “should I expect you for dinner this evening?”

“I wouldn’t dare miss the opportunity to taste your cooking while it is still hot!  Yes, Hannah, I will be ‘dining in’ this evening. We still need to have that talk.” He reached for her hand, “I hope you don’t mind waiting until tonight. I have an early appointment and need to leave soon.”

“Of course.” Hannah smiled, trying to hide her disappointment. The entire conversation this morning had been all business. She was beginning to realize, and didn’t mind admitting to herself, that she wanted more.

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A Fiction Series that is inspired in part by Jane Dougherty’s Microficton Challenge and wonderful painting prompts. You can read previous parts of this story by clicking HERE and scrolling to the story entitled “Seasoning”.


Seasoning- Part 14

painting by Antos Frolka – Auf dem Weg zur Kirche (On the way to Church)


Seasoning – Part 14

Henry dutifully took a bite of food closing his eyes as he savored it slowly.

Hanna sat down next to him, whipping her cloth napkin with a snap before laying it gently over her lap. They ate in silence but for the sound of utensils pinging on china. It was music to her ears. She paused for a moment to glance at Henry, smiling as she looked down at his empty plate, satisfied that he had eaten every last morsel. Unconsciously she sighed relieving days of tension that had mounted inside her.

“Excuse me. Did you say something Hannah?”

“No. It’s just been a long day.”

“A long day and night! …Hannah?”

The tone in Henry’s voice startled Hannah. She raised the napkin to her lips dabbing them  daintily before looking up. He was staring intensely at her when their eyes met. “Yes?” she whispered.

Henry reached across the table cupping her hand under his. “I want to thank you. From the bottom of my heart, thank you for helping me tonight…for preparing this delicious dinner…for…”

“Of course. It is my job. I am happy to be of service.”

“You interrupted me, Hannah…”

“I’m sorry. I’m always saying the wrong….”

Henry placed his fingers gently over her lips, “Shhhh, please let me finish. Most of all I want to thank you for helping me, for letting me…oh I don’t know what’s gotten into me. Maybe it was the fire that jolted me, that made me feel something for the first time in years.” Henry closed his eyes breathing deeply to regain focus. “No. I’m not being honest. It wasn’t the fire Hannah. It was you.” Henry slid his fingers upward from her lips, caressing her cheek, then brushing the damp hair from her forehead.

“Oh…I can’t help feeling…I know we’ve never met before this week, but I feel as though I know you. It’s as if we’ve known each other for a very long time. Is that strange?”

“No Hannah, it’s not strange. I feel it too.” Henry reached for her hand again. “But it’s late. We’re both exhausted. We should get some sleep.” He lifted her hand brushing it tenderly with his lips. “We’ll talk more in the morning. Good night.”

“Goodnight…” Hannah watched him depart to his chambers. All she could think about was tomorrow. She cleared the table and set about cleaning the dishes.  As exhausted as she was, she pushed herself to finish the task. It gave her time to sort through the questions swirling in her head.”How do I know this man? Have we met?” As impossible as it was, Hannah could not make sense of what she was feeling; of what she knew in her heart. Finally, she headed back to her room, pealed off her ruined tea dress, and slipped between the sheets, settling her weary head into the soft embrace of her pillow.

Two restless souls stared at the ceiling from their beds that night; souls that cursed the night and longed for the dawn.

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Another installment of Seasoning. Inspired in part by the painting above by Antos Frolka retitled by Jane Dougherty for the prompt as “a satisfied couple”. I am afraid that my characters this week are anything but, each one stirred by strange memories of a distant past. Though if we’re to play devil’s advocate here, perhaps it is the memory of the satisfied couple that they once were in another lifetime that has them so befuddled! Read other installments of Seasoning HERE . 


Seasoning – Part 13

‘Lovers’ by Felix Nussbaum


Hannah looked into Henry’s eyes. Those eyes that had been fierce with rage just days ago no longer hinted of malice or anger. They were playful, tender even, with an intensity that seared Hannah to her core. Her racing heart sent a rush of heat through her veins flushing her neck and face. 

“Uh, well, uh, I believe, Mr. Chambers, that we were about to have dinner,” Hannah stumbled over her words, looking away, “though I am afraid dinner has gotten cold by now.”

Taking her cue, Henry sighed, “Well, cold or not, I’m famished as I am sure you are. Shall we?” He stepped back bowing slightly, arm extended toward the house. “After you.”

Hannah rushed past Henry hoping he would not notice that she was blushing. 

He watched her pass, gazing at her perfect figure, revealed all the more by her clinging wet tea dress. “Oh and one more thing Hannah,” he called to her, “it’s Henry. None of this Mr. Chambers business, especially after tonight. I don’t know what I would have done if you hadn’t been here to help.” 

By the time Henry arrived in the dining room, Hannah was busy plating dinner, the room aglow in candlelight, hazy from remnants of smoke. He leaned on the chair taking it all in; her graceful movements as she dipped a serving spoon into each bowl depositing perfect portions on his plate. “How could I have been such a beast to this lovely young woman?” He winced at the thought. 

Hannah noticed his souring facial expression. “Oh! I’m sorry! Too much? Not enough?”

“No Hannah it’s perfect. Really. I was just thinking. How can you be so kind to me? I can’t imagine what you must be thinking after all that I’ve put you through. I’ve been so horrible. Can you ever forgive me?”

“Oh. Well, what I am thinking, after spending the day in this beautiful house, admiring the lovely things here, the care and attention to detail, the undeniable woman’s touch, the photographs…all I’m thinking, sir,” she stopped for a moment, looking directly into his eyes, “is that you must have loved her very much.”

Tears welled in Henry’s eyes as he leaned against the back of the chair propped only by Hannah’s tender gaze. 

Hannah put the spoon down and walked behind Henry gently guiding him into the chair. “Here you go. You said you were famished. And I didn’t spend all afternoon in that kitchen to feed the compost heap. So…let’s have dinner, shall we?”

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Read previous installments of Seasoning HERE. This series is inspired by the lovely paintings that are part of Jane Dougherty’s Microfiction Challenge. This chapter is a bit late to the party, which only means I will be adding a new installment in a day or two. Thank you to everyone who is following this little story. ❤️


Hook, Line and Dairy Farming  

 

 

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Painting by Antos Frolka


Charles was quite pleased with himself. This was the third week that Pastor Smith had complimented him on his dairy farm and mentioned his prize bull, Luther, by name.

“I like that Pastor Smith, Henrietta. Can’t believe I waited so long to join you at Sunday Meeting. Why didn’t you tell he was such a nice fellow?”

“Well Charles, I never had very much in common with him, you know. Not that I don’t consider him a wonderful preacher. But you and he? I declare, you two are like long lost brothers!”

“I know what you mean. Amazing isn’t it?”

“Yes Charles, it certainly is amazing!” Henrietta beamed. Just a month previous, Charles wouldn’t have even considered going to church with her. But Pastor Smith changed all that.

“We’re planning a homecoming potluck in a few weeks ladies. Of course I am looking forward to sampling your wonderful cooking.” Pastor Smith smiled. “Be sure to invite your husbands,” he added, directing his attention toward Henrietta and others who came to church alone week after week. “And one more request. I need you to tell me the one thing that makes your husband most proud.”

Henrietta didn’t know if she should feel guilty for being part of such a ruse. “I suppose the end justifies the means,” she thought, “and it was Pastor Smith’s idea after all.” At any rate, she was thrilled to have her husband by her side each week.

Yes, a wise shepherd knows how to gather his flock before they realize they’re being gathered!

Kat ~10 October 2016
(256 Words)

A short story for Jane Dougherty’s Microfiction Challenge based on the painting, “On the Way to Church” by Antos Frolka.