It had been three winters, three springs, summers, and autumns. The seasons melded together without her light there to breathe life into them.
Henry spent his days working from darkest dawn to waning dusk, the minutes gnawing at his heart, tumbling into hours, days, years. Grief is an unwelcome squatter that has overstayed its visit.
He ate his meals out, avoiding the kitchen when he was home. Dust had settled like a soft wooly sheath on the furniture and floated in the streams of sunlight that slipped through the shuttered curtains.
Henry managed to keep up appearances in public with a ready smile and affirming nod. From the outside he appeared to be getting on with life. The house too held its facade intact with its gleaming white-washed siding and welcoming portico.
Those who ventured past the gate though, realized something was amiss. The garden, once vibrant with fragrant blossoms, had been overtaken by thistles and brambles.
“I must see to the garden,” Henry often mused. In truth, he had grown accustomed to the weeds.
kat – 16 July 2016
(175 Words)
Part 2 of Jane Dougherty’s Microfiction Challenge inspired this week by this painting, La Porte by Henri Duhem. You can other Parts HERE.
July 16th, 2016 at 12:43 pm
Loving this story!
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July 16th, 2016 at 1:57 pm
Thank you Diane! This one wrote itself. 😊
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July 16th, 2016 at 12:45 pm
[…] I am afraid I a a week behind on Jane Dougherty’s Microfiction Challenge, but this week’s challenge painting intrigued me. When I read that it was to be the second installment from the previous week, of course I needed to lay the foundation for my story. And so this entry is Part 1. You can read Part 2 HERE. […]
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July 16th, 2016 at 4:56 pm
Are there more parts to the story or was this it? Poor Henry.
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July 16th, 2016 at 5:09 pm
I have already been put on notice by Jane to keep going. I have a few ideas 😉
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July 16th, 2016 at 5:29 pm
Oh yay, excellent!
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July 16th, 2016 at 5:06 pm
I hope next week’s picture is going to coincide with your thoughts, because this really needs to keep going 🙂
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July 16th, 2016 at 5:07 pm
Thank you Jane. We shall see. 🙂
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July 16th, 2016 at 9:30 pm
I feel bad for Henry. Like he’s stopped living, because Alice has. It’s easy to not try when your sad and used to not trying. Hope he gets out of his funk and brings back life to the garden Alice loved.
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July 21st, 2016 at 10:32 am
[…] Seasoning – Part 2 | like mercury colliding… […]
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July 21st, 2016 at 1:23 pm
Beautiful story. I loved this line: “Grief is an unwelcome squatter that has overstayed its visit.”
I’m looking forward to reading the next part.
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July 21st, 2016 at 1:24 pm
Thanks Merril. I’m waiting for the next cue. 😊
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July 21st, 2016 at 1:28 pm
I too look forward. There is so much depth here. (K)
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