“Who would do such a thing?!” Mae Brown asked the Officer when he arrived.
“When did you first notice the broken statue Mrs. Brown?
“This morning. They must have done it last night.”
“Have you noticed anything else out of place?”
“No. Except, do you see the bracelet on the left wrist? That’s new.”
Mae thought about it for a moment. It looked like the bracelets she had sent to the neighborhood girls recently. There were the Monroe twins across the street, and Sue next door and Amanda on the corner. Amanda! Oh dear, Mae thought, such a sweet girl. What was I thinking giving a bracelet to a girl who lost both hands in a fire!
“Did you think of something Mrs. Brown? Anything you remember will help us get to the bottom of this.”
“No officer. Thank you for coming.”
“Well, if you think of anything, let us know.”
Mae wouldn’t be calling the officer anytime soon. But she would be planning a visit to a certain little girl to ask her forgiveness.
kat ~ 8 June 2016
(175 Words)
A story for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (FFfAW) prompted by the photo by Phylor that you see above.
June 8th, 2016 at 1:36 pm
Great story Kat ❤
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June 8th, 2016 at 1:39 pm
Thanks. After I posted it, I noticed several of the stories based on this prompt looked like they might be a similar theme. Just something about breaking the arms off…knew there had to be a story in that. 🙂
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June 8th, 2016 at 3:19 pm
I really liked it!
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June 8th, 2016 at 3:59 pm
Thank you. Now playing need to go read some of the others. 😊
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June 8th, 2016 at 2:11 pm
Mae did something nice for the girls on the block by giving them bracelets but one little girl didn’t have any arms – which is so sad! She lost her arms in a fire and the girls were letting Mae know about her unintended cruelty. I feel badly for the little girl and for Mae. Great story, Kat!
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June 8th, 2016 at 2:44 pm
Yes it is sad…even when someone tries to be nice…it can backfire.
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June 8th, 2016 at 3:14 pm
Yes, I have had that happen and it really stinks!
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June 8th, 2016 at 2:49 pm
What a story Kat! Heart wrenching!
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June 8th, 2016 at 3:57 pm
The photo was just so sad. 😢
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June 8th, 2016 at 4:01 pm
It was
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June 8th, 2016 at 5:44 pm
😢
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June 8th, 2016 at 11:11 pm
I once asked a blind woman if she saw a movie we were talking about. DOH! So yeah, I get this totally.
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June 8th, 2016 at 11:19 pm
Yep! Ouch! That had to be embarrassing. 😳
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June 8th, 2016 at 11:23 pm
I know, right? I am so far behind today on everything. I’ll try to get to WWF soon.
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June 8th, 2016 at 11:26 pm
I haven’t looked at wwf all day. Been doing some writing 🙂
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June 8th, 2016 at 11:29 pm
Excellent plan!
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June 8th, 2016 at 11:45 pm
I loved the story Kat. Made me see the pic again and spot the bracelet. Great take!
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June 8th, 2016 at 11:47 pm
Thank you Shivangi. When I first saw the photo I thought the bracelet was odd.
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June 9th, 2016 at 9:22 am
Yes, it looked odd…great that you spotted it and wove a story around it😀
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June 11th, 2016 at 4:16 pm
I’m really impressed by your story, which incorporates the statue with broken arms and the colourful bracelet so perfectly!
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June 11th, 2016 at 4:29 pm
Thank you so much Margarisa
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June 11th, 2016 at 4:30 pm
The pleasure is all mine, Kat. 🙂
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