For this week’s White Out Wednesday Challenge. This is the jumbled splash of words I got from the original text that you can read HERE. and below that is my own scribbling. A new challenge this week…move the lines around. I played it safe and moved just one line out of sequence. I think it worked out okay. Thanks Pat for another fun lunch break exercise. Back to work! 🙂
Sleepwalking is
hope infused
with beauty
and light, dreams
crystallize into
reality; a pity
I don’t want
more. What
difference
does it make?
I never want
for anything.
Actually, it’s
a dream to be
dreaming. I
make my little
plans and feel
a tinge of
gratitude.
Miraculous
universe,
remarkably
dangerous!
~kat – 29 March 2017
like mercury colliding... 
March 29th, 2017 at 1:16 pm
Neatly tied up all the loose ends to give a story that was truly hidden in those words. Sounds almost like a secret message that only you could decipher!
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March 29th, 2017 at 1:18 pm
Thank you. It is similar to magnetic poetry; a jigsaw puzzle with words. 🙂
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March 29th, 2017 at 1:20 pm
Is that what it is? I had been wondering. It sounded like a challenge.
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March 29th, 2017 at 7:12 pm
It can be challenging. But once you pick a few words you build around them. 😊
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March 29th, 2017 at 4:32 pm
Clever, I like it.
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March 29th, 2017 at 11:14 pm
Thanks Aidin.
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March 29th, 2017 at 5:01 pm
Ah cleverly done Kat….liked what you did..
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March 29th, 2017 at 11:16 pm
Thanks Michael. This one took a bit of tweaking and retweaking, but I enjoy the process. 😊
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March 29th, 2017 at 11:32 pm
Process Kat is always worth it and a lot of fun I find…
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March 29th, 2017 at 8:25 pm
Oh boy, that one sure was a challenge to find the right words, but it worked out great!
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March 29th, 2017 at 8:27 pm
Thanks. Yep…took a little brain power. 😉
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March 30th, 2017 at 2:20 pm
Brava.. 🌹🌹🌹
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March 31st, 2017 at 1:10 pm
WOWWOWOW!
Amazing Job Kat 😀
Absolutely stunning and mind blowing how you pulled and culled and then saw something that ended up being totally transformed from the original! Truly astounding!
Leave it to the poet to figure out how to read between the lines and see in a new direction 😀
Awesome Kat – really – I’m sitting here just loving it – and wow – the beginning is stellar – and then, the line “pity I don’t want more” – that just totally blew my mind.
Superb – would never know this was culled as a whiteout!
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April 4th, 2017 at 12:07 am
Thank you so much Pat. I love this challenge! Keep em coming. 🙂 It can be addictive. (Sorry for the late response. For some reason your comment ended up in my SPAM box. WP can be so persnickety!
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April 5th, 2017 at 12:19 pm
yup – that’s what’s been happening to most of my comments lately …. ended up in SPAM – which makes for a lousy way to try to host a prompt! (excuse me while I insert a string of swear words here 😉 )
Anyhow, glad you enjoyed and I’m just going to be sitting tight for now on WOW – until this SPAM bot thing debugs itself.
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April 5th, 2017 at 2:44 pm
I will miss the challenge, but I do understand. Have a good rest of your week!
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April 9th, 2017 at 9:36 am
thanks – and I hope your week ended well, and that the weekend was great 🙂
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