Sevenling (spent years)
I have spent years…decades
surviving, on too little sleep
working a job to make ends meet
Burning the candle at both ends
too little time for leisure (what’s that?)
and long conversations with friends
joy etched in smile lines and stretch marks
~kat
The elements of the Sevenling are:
1. a heptastich, a poem in 7 lines made up of 2 tercets followed by a single line. metered at the discretion of the poet.
2. unrhymed.
4. composed with 3 complimentary images in the first tercet and 3 parallel images in the second tercet. The end line is a juxtaposed summary of the 2 parallels, a sort of “punchline”.
5. the poem should be titled “Sevenling: (first few words of poem).
June 11th, 2019 at 10:22 am
[…] got this idea, to try to write a SEVENLING , from Kat […]
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June 11th, 2019 at 10:53 am
Always glad to see the smile lines!
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June 11th, 2019 at 11:22 am
Yep…they are the good reminders. 🙂
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June 11th, 2019 at 11:49 am
The last line is the masterpiece!
joy etched in smile lines and stretch marks
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June 11th, 2019 at 12:23 pm
Thank you Sadje…it is so true isn’t it!? 😉
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June 11th, 2019 at 12:39 pm
Absolutely right! My pleasure
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