the children are gone
they were never really mine
though i held them twenty years
my dreams faded over time
blood and sweat and many tears
though i held them twenty years
they decided who they’d be
blood and sweat and many tears
all for naught, when they left me
they decided who they’d be
independence lured them hence
all for naught, when they left me
did my best, in my defense
independence lured them hence
gone to live their life and dreams
did my best, in my defense
doesn’t matter now, it seems
gone to live their life and dreams
they think they must turn away
doesn’t matter now, it seems
‘twas a simple role i played
they think they must turn away
my dreams faded over time
‘twas a simple role i played
they were never really mine
~kat
A Pantoum for NaPoWriMo 2019 #12 Prompt: write a poem about a dull thing that you own, and why (and how) you love it. Alternatively, what would it mean to you to give away or destroy a significant object?
April 12th, 2019 at 1:16 pm
How poignant! Heart touching
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April 12th, 2019 at 1:41 pm
Thanks Sadje. It is the very real place that I am at right now. ❤
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April 12th, 2019 at 1:59 pm
I can imagine that it must be difficult. That’s how it works.
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April 12th, 2019 at 2:29 pm
Yep.
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April 12th, 2019 at 2:15 pm
The hardest part of being a parent 💜💜
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April 12th, 2019 at 2:30 pm
It certainly is!
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April 12th, 2019 at 4:24 pm
💜
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April 12th, 2019 at 4:33 pm
Heart wrenching!
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April 13th, 2019 at 2:51 am
WOW this poem’s AMAZING! ’tis the future of every other parents though >.>) (mostly)
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April 13th, 2019 at 7:57 am
Yes in varying degrees all parents must let go of their children. Thank you Milly.
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April 13th, 2019 at 12:53 pm
Marvelous (@—>—)
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April 13th, 2019 at 4:49 pm
Thank you Dorna! ❤️
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April 13th, 2019 at 9:57 pm
Wonderful writing…I think letting children go would be so wrenching.
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April 13th, 2019 at 11:08 pm
It is hard, but it is life. ❤️
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April 13th, 2019 at 11:18 pm
True enough, dear heart ❤
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