the fool
poor old chap is down
in the dumps, in a blue funk
with a chip on his
shoulder…once upon a time
he walked on air, flying high
~kat
A Tanka for Colleen Chesebro’s Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge using synomyms only of the words Happy & Morose. I found a lovely collection of idioms that were listed as synonyms for these words. Of course I had to use them all! Well, most of them anyhow. What fun this week’s challenge was!
Happy: walking on air, flying high,
Morose: down in the dumps, in a blue funk, chip on the shoulder
August 2nd, 2018 at 3:48 pm
Marvelous creativity, Kat! I love this. I would say you got the archetype of the fool in your poem perfectly! 😀 ❤
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August 2nd, 2018 at 6:12 pm
Thank you! I was thrilled to find so many idioms in the thesaurus.
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August 2nd, 2018 at 6:30 pm
LOL! You did well! ❤️
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August 2nd, 2018 at 7:01 pm
Great prompt words! 🙂
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August 4th, 2018 at 3:00 pm
Groovy! 😎🥀
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August 6th, 2018 at 6:49 pm
Love it, Kat! 😀 xx
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August 6th, 2018 at 8:49 pm
Thanks Vashti! 😊
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August 6th, 2018 at 10:06 pm
The fool is always a welcome guest (K)
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August 7th, 2018 at 4:21 pm
Yes indeed! 😊
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