The Sweater
Sometimes I wrap myself in thin
green, shetland, stiff with age, smelling
of moth balls and stale dust,
to remember. It’s all I have left
of you…a sweater that’s starting to
unravel along the edges. Like you,
those final years, unraveling,
spiraling into an abyss so deep,
none of us could have saved you.
I know that now. It’s strange.
Your sweater, just an old wooly
rag really, hints of Old Spice
aftershave wafting, when I press my
face into its course, wiry fibers, has
saved me from the edge more
than a few times. I guess that’s why
I can’t part with it.
I suppose I never will.
~kat
For NaPoWriMo 2018 Day 26. Prompt: write a poem that includes images that engage all five senses.
April 26th, 2018 at 10:59 pm
Wow very nice Kat!
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April 26th, 2018 at 11:34 pm
❤️❤️❤️
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April 27th, 2018 at 4:23 am
This is beautiful Kat, is it true 💜🌹
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April 27th, 2018 at 7:19 am
It’s true for so many people, in so many places, and the Old Spice reminds me of my dear Dad!
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April 27th, 2018 at 8:07 am
Yes we all, those of us of a certain age have a memory of Old Spice. 💜
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April 27th, 2018 at 9:37 am
So very true. ❤️❤️❤️
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April 27th, 2018 at 9:36 am
It was my dad’s favorite too! 😊
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April 27th, 2018 at 9:37 am
I really do have that old sweater Willow…though the old spice is fading. ❤️
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April 27th, 2018 at 10:44 am
That’s sad but I think you will always find it 💜💜
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April 27th, 2018 at 6:35 am
Sweet!
Simply sweet.
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April 27th, 2018 at 9:38 am
Thank you. ❤️
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April 27th, 2018 at 10:23 am
Truly beautiful and deeply moving. It brought back memories for me. Thanks, Kat! ❤
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April 27th, 2018 at 10:25 am
Hugs Joy! Even if I should find myself without that sweater, it is the memories that will continue to wrap me. I’m glad the poem brought back memories for you too. 🙂
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April 28th, 2018 at 2:49 pm
Awe.. 😎🥀
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April 28th, 2018 at 5:02 pm
❤️❤️❤️
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