Revelry
those seeking control
would keep us quaking in fear
better to dictate
their demands, but here’s a spin…
let’s rollick instead, for spite
~kat
A Tanka for Colleen Chesebro’s Weekly Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge using synonyms of the prompt words: Command: control, dictate, demand, & Dance: revel, rollick, spin.
April 12th, 2018 at 7:50 am
Let’s do, and say we did!
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April 12th, 2018 at 8:35 am
Yes!
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April 12th, 2018 at 9:08 am
😃😄😅😆
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April 12th, 2018 at 9:19 am
Love this – especially the line – ‘let’s rollick instead, for spite’. Such a perfect riposte.
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April 12th, 2018 at 9:32 am
Thank you Francine. Yes! We can have a robust revolution in revelry! 🙂
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April 12th, 2018 at 12:20 pm
LOL! I love it! Rollick instead of Frolick!! Rock and Roll baby! Well done!! ❤
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April 12th, 2018 at 12:46 pm
Yes Ma’am! Rollicking definitely fit the mood better than frolicking. I just love words! 😉
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April 12th, 2018 at 1:15 pm
This was really creative. I loved it! 😀
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April 12th, 2018 at 3:28 pm
Thank you Colleen! 😊
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April 12th, 2018 at 7:31 pm
Amen. 😇😎🥀
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April 12th, 2018 at 8:47 pm
👍🏻❤️👍🏻
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April 16th, 2018 at 2:09 am
[…] Revelry | like mercury colliding… […]
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