March 30, 2018

Essence #30

azure splashed, dappled grey,
clouds, wind-lashed, wisp away

~kat

Essence #30 for Jane Dougherty’s daily Essence Poem Challenge.

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16 responses to “Essence #30”

elysianandcynosure
March 30th, 2018 at 10:22 am

Best essence I’ve read till date!!

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- Kat Myrman
  March 30th, 2018 at 10:23 am
  
  Thank you! It’s only taken 30 days for me to get it right! 😄 For such a tiny form, it’s a real bugger to tackle!
  
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  - elysianandcynosure
    March 30th, 2018 at 10:36 am
    
    Interesting 🤔… The hard work does pay off in a form of a nice poem tho
    
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    - Kat Myrman
      March 30th, 2018 at 10:42 am
      
      Thanks again! 😊
      
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willowdot21
March 30th, 2018 at 10:48 am

Another perfect essence, only one more to do, what’s next I wander? 💜

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- Kat Myrman
  March 30th, 2018 at 11:08 am
  
  Maybe we could try the Tilus…Oh Jane…what do you think?
  10 syllables–3 lines–2 parts–about nature
  1st part:
  Line 1=6 syllables
  Line 2=3 syllables
  2nd Part:
  Line 3=1 syllable
  
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  - willowdot21
    March 30th, 2018 at 11:11 am
    
    Sounds good to me 💜💜
    
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Jane Dougherty
March 30th, 2018 at 11:25 am

It is one of your best ones, Kat. You won’t want to stop tomorrow. I’ll look into the tilus. The name sounds infectious…

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- Kat Myrman
  March 30th, 2018 at 12:07 pm
  
  You challenged us once before with the tilus prompted by a painting of blue horses. 😊 thanks Jane. I shall not miss the Essence. 😉
  
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  - Jane Dougherty
    March 30th, 2018 at 12:33 pm
    
    So I discovered 🙂 The only thing I don’t like about the tilus is the one syllable last line. It means, find a one-syllable word to describe the first two lines. Just a teensy weensy bit restrictive maybe.
    
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    - Kat Myrman
      March 30th, 2018 at 12:39 pm
      
      It is a challenge. 🙂
      
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    - Jane Dougherty
      March 30th, 2018 at 12:44 pm
      
      Yeeees…
      
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Peter's pondering
March 30th, 2018 at 12:18 pm

Elegant Essence!

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- Kat Myrman
  March 30th, 2018 at 12:19 pm
  
  Thank you Peter. I have conquered the Essence with one day to spare. It is a form I shall not miss. 🙂
  
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Woman walking Max
March 30th, 2018 at 1:33 pm

Love the atmosphere of this poem- the language feels like the wild wind, and the photo is fab.

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- Kat Myrman
  March 30th, 2018 at 2:07 pm
  
  Thank you Francine. I love having a window in my office. 🙂
  
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