March 3, 2018

Florette #3

By Kat Myrman

soft the light plays, dawning
dreams give way to longing

~kat

For Jane Dougherty’s Poem-a-Day Challenge…Florette #3…28 to go. 🤔

This entry was posted on Saturday, March 3rd, 2018 at 12:05 pm and tagged with Challenge, digital art, florette, Poem a Day, Poetry and posted in Challenges and Writing Prompts, Digital Art & Photos, Florette - 6/6-a/a w/internal rhyme, Poetry, Random Thoughts and Musings. You can follow any responses to this entry through the RSS 2.0 feed.

10 responses to “Florette #3”

willowdot21
March 3rd, 2018 at 12:12 pm

Truly beautiful 💜

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- Kat Myrman
  March 3rd, 2018 at 12:13 pm
  
  Thank you Willow. These are a truly a labour of love…❤️
  
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  - willowdot21
    March 3rd, 2018 at 1:22 pm
    
    Yes they are💜
    
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Jane Dougherty
March 3rd, 2018 at 12:13 pm

Another good one 🙂 We’ll battle on, shoulder to shoulder.

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- Kat Myrman
  March 3rd, 2018 at 12:19 pm
  
  Thank you Jane…this one only took half a morning to muster! ❤️
  
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  - Jane Dougherty
    March 3rd, 2018 at 12:22 pm
    
    I’ve had some really great six syllable lines and not been able to find a rhyme in the middle.
    
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    - Kat Myrman
      March 3rd, 2018 at 12:29 pm
      
      That is the tricky part. I’m also bothered by the six syllables, when seven feels better in the reread.
      
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    - Jane Dougherty
      March 3rd, 2018 at 2:46 pm
      
      I’d always rather have beats than syllables, but that’s the rule…
      
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    - Kat Myrman
      March 3rd, 2018 at 4:14 pm
      
      I agree! 😊
      
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    - Jane Dougherty
      March 3rd, 2018 at 4:37 pm
      
      🙂
      
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