“Hurry up squaaaawk…hurry up Chuck!”
“What’s Murphy yapping about? …Oh my god! What happened?!”
“We’ve been robbed. They took my stereo system and my power tools!”
“Oh no! Did you call the police?”
“They’re on their way. And of course I’ve got Murphy here.”
“Murphy?”
“Yep! He’s our eye witness.”
“Wait! Do you think Murphy saw the robbers?”
“I do. When I came in he called them out by name. Chuck and…”
“Hurrying Pete. Stereo…pack the steeereeeoooo….aaack!”
“See what I mean?”
“Wow! Way to go Murph!”
“Murphy…hurry…Murphy up Chuck…Pete pack the power tools…stereoooo!”
“Brilliant! Murphy! You’re such a good boy!”
~kat
100 Words for Rochelle Wisoff-Fields Friday Fictioneers Challenge inspired by this photo of a Myna bird by © DOUGLAS M. MACILROY
like mercury colliding... 
October 12th, 2017 at 2:00 pm
They shouldn’t go robin should they!
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October 12th, 2017 at 2:16 pm
You crack me up Peter! 😜
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October 12th, 2017 at 2:31 pm
I try my best!
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October 12th, 2017 at 2:05 pm
That’s a great take on the prompt, Kat!
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October 12th, 2017 at 3:49 pm
Thank you Shweta! 😊
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October 14th, 2017 at 4:44 am
You’re welcome, Kat! 😀
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October 12th, 2017 at 2:35 pm
Awesome Eye-witness. 😎😎😎😎😎
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October 12th, 2017 at 3:48 pm
When I saw it was a Myna bird…just had to go there! 😊
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October 12th, 2017 at 2:43 pm
Hah! Second “witness” to a crime this week. This was a most fun take, Kat!
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October 12th, 2017 at 3:53 pm
It’s a natural assumption given the star of this prompt…the Myna bird! 😊
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October 12th, 2017 at 3:04 pm
Good one, Kat. Those thieves didn’t count on a mynah hiccup to their plans!
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October 12th, 2017 at 3:54 pm
Most certainly they did not. He was a secret weapon! 😀
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October 12th, 2017 at 5:30 pm
Nice take on the prompt. Loved the dialogue.
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October 12th, 2017 at 5:41 pm
Thank you! 😊
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October 12th, 2017 at 5:45 pm
Another bird stopping crime – quite a few bird heroes out there it seems! Good fun.
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October 12th, 2017 at 7:32 pm
So I’ve heard. It is a fun prompt! 😊
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October 12th, 2017 at 9:06 pm
I like a bird that earns its keep!
Mine: https://kindredspirit23.wordpress.com/2017/10/12/birds-of-a-feather-flock-me/
Scott
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October 12th, 2017 at 10:20 pm
Haha. Fun.
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October 12th, 2017 at 11:00 pm
Thanks Irene
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October 13th, 2017 at 4:50 am
Before long they are going to need witness cages in courtrooms! Excellent
Click to read my FriFic!
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October 13th, 2017 at 6:07 am
And witNEST protection programs. 😉 couldn’t resist😀
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October 13th, 2017 at 6:43 am
Dear Kat,
I wonder if Murphy’s testimony will hold up in court. But you’ve beaked my interest. 😉 Raaaaawwwwk! Good one!
Shalom,
Rochelle
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October 13th, 2017 at 6:53 am
Haha! As I mentioned in another comment, he may need to go into the witNEST protection program. 😜 such a fun prompt Rochelle!
Peace,
Kat
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October 13th, 2017 at 9:48 am
Good example of how to tell a story by dialogue alone! Nice work.
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October 13th, 2017 at 11:09 am
Thank you Penny! 😊
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October 13th, 2017 at 11:29 am
Why am I laughing at this crime ? 🙂
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October 13th, 2017 at 11:38 am
😀 it is kind of funny that the crooks were foiled by a Myna bird! 😀
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October 15th, 2017 at 1:52 pm
Really enjoyed this. Dialogue works so well. Great bird!
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October 15th, 2017 at 3:46 pm
Thank you Rachel. 😊
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