savor each moment’s bliss
dawn’s sparkling threads of light
buds with dewdrops clinging
fluttering wings in flight
fragrant breezes, warblers trilling
savor each moment’s bliss
cups of tea, honey sweet
sleepy morning sighs
ling’ring between cool sheets
pale cerulean skies
savor each moment’s bliss
acts of random kindness
miracles in the wings
havens from the madness
important things, not things
savor each moment’s bliss
such beauty all around
breath of heaven hov’ring
the blessings to be found
moments spent discov’ring
~kat – 12 April 2017
(NaPoWriMo 2017 #12 – A Monchielle Poem – A poem that consists of four five-line stanzas where the first line repeats in each verse. Each line within the stazas consist of six syllables, and lines three and five rhyme. The rhyme pattern is Abcdc Aefgf Ahiji Aklml.)
April 12th, 2017 at 1:31 pm
Amazing work with the form, and very lovely.
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April 12th, 2017 at 1:33 pm
Thank you. This is a new form to me. I love any form that has refrain lines. 👍🏻
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April 12th, 2017 at 1:35 pm
Welcome! I don’t think I’d heard of the form before–and I agree with you, in that I like ones with refrains too. But the rhyme scheme can be a challenge 🙂 (Takes more time for me to do well 🙂 )
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April 12th, 2017 at 1:43 pm
Yes. That is the tricky part! 😊
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April 12th, 2017 at 2:12 pm
For certain 🙂
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April 12th, 2017 at 3:04 pm
You have such a skill at all these different forms! This one has a lovely lilt to it.
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April 12th, 2017 at 4:56 pm
Thank you. The meter and rhyme schemes have a lot to do with it. That’s why I love trying new forms. 😊
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April 13th, 2017 at 11:58 pm
Wonderful. That repition is powerful.
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April 14th, 2017 at 6:22 am
My favorite forms have Refrain elements. I agree, they can be quite compelling. Thanks Mandi. 😊
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April 14th, 2017 at 4:15 pm
Fantabulous! 🌹🌹🌹
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April 14th, 2017 at 6:40 pm
Thank you Dorna. ❤️
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