The boom of a trash truck outside startled her. Her head was spinning.
“Where am I?” she gasped, fumbling for her clothes. As she dressed the sound of someone showering hummed from the next room.
“Why don’t I remember. Was I drugged?” she mumbled.
She grabbed her things and tiptoed past the bathroom; the front door in sight at the end of the hall, when she heard the water stop.
“You’re up! Where are you going so early?” his unfamiliar voice rasped from behind.
“Work. I have to go to work,” she whimpered not turning. The door was padlocked.
-kat – 12 April 2017
(99 Words)
For Rochelle Wisoff-Fields Friday Fictioneers challenge based on this photo prompt by © Dale Rogerson
April 13th, 2017 at 3:31 am
Killer twist in the last line
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April 13th, 2017 at 6:19 am
Thank you Neil. I love a good gotcha!😊
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April 13th, 2017 at 6:13 am
Short and thrilling. I wonder what happens next?
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April 13th, 2017 at 6:20 am
With pleasure Jacqueline. Your words are always delightful and inspiring! ❤️
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April 13th, 2017 at 8:12 am
Dear Kat,
I’m sure there’s more story leading up to that ending. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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April 13th, 2017 at 8:52 am
Thank you Rochelle. There is no doubt more story to be told. Peace to you. -kat
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April 13th, 2017 at 11:24 am
Omg!!
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April 13th, 2017 at 12:13 pm
Gotcha!
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April 13th, 2017 at 1:13 pm
You certainly did!!
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April 13th, 2017 at 11:53 am
A nightmare come true for her… 😮
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April 13th, 2017 at 12:13 pm
Back to flash fiction cliffhangers (which you know I love!)
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April 13th, 2017 at 12:18 pm
And you area good at it!
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April 13th, 2017 at 12:23 pm
Thanks my friend! 😉
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April 13th, 2017 at 6:26 pm
Oh that last line was like a punch to the gut.
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April 13th, 2017 at 8:53 pm
I do love a good twist. 😉
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April 13th, 2017 at 9:37 pm
If only she could reach her cell phone, but it sounds like she may be lucky to survive this episode. Good job of setting the scene for what’s to come.
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April 13th, 2017 at 10:03 pm
Thank you Christine.
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April 14th, 2017 at 8:28 am
And I thought it was April the 1st gotchme!
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April 14th, 2017 at 1:18 pm
Couldn’t resist. 😊
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April 14th, 2017 at 4:59 pm
I know the feeling ☺
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April 14th, 2017 at 4:06 pm
A thrilling thriller! 😎😇
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April 14th, 2017 at 6:39 pm
Yes indeed! 😊
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April 15th, 2017 at 8:07 am
Killer last line!
Well done, bravo!
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April 15th, 2017 at 8:30 am
Thank you. A gotcha! 😊
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April 15th, 2017 at 1:52 pm
creepy goodness ❤
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April 17th, 2017 at 8:28 pm
Thanks! I like throwing a few zingers in every now and again! 🙂
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April 17th, 2017 at 2:33 pm
Oh man! Not a good scenario ahead…
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April 17th, 2017 at 10:58 pm
Nope…not good at all. 😦
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