it can break a heart,
a single silly petal
that says, “loves me not…”
kat ~ 24 October 2016
For Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge, prompt words: heart & petals.
it can break a heart,
a single silly petal
that says, “loves me not…”
kat ~ 24 October 2016
For Ronovan Writes Haiku Challenge, prompt words: heart & petals.
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October 24th, 2016 at 11:43 pm
Clever take on the prompt!
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October 25th, 2016 at 12:05 pm
Thanks Magarisa! 😜
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October 25th, 2016 at 1:32 pm
My pleasure, Kat! 😆
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October 25th, 2016 at 1:49 am
cool!
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October 25th, 2016 at 12:06 pm
Thanks! 😊
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October 25th, 2016 at 1:54 am
It doesn’t do the flower much going either. Seriously, a lovely Haiku.
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October 25th, 2016 at 1:06 pm
That’s for sure! Thanks!
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October 25th, 2016 at 3:04 pm
😊
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October 25th, 2016 at 2:45 am
so true!
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October 25th, 2016 at 1:06 pm
I know…I have known girls who went through several flowers until the petals said what they wanted to hear!
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October 25th, 2016 at 12:20 pm
Such a heartbreaking truth.
Marvelous poem.
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October 25th, 2016 at 1:04 pm
Thanks Dorna. Amazing, the power of a single flower petal!
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October 25th, 2016 at 6:25 pm
Oh!
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October 26th, 2016 at 12:30 pm
Memories of childhood days…making dandelion crowns and whistles from over-ripe green onions… and pulling flower petals while chanting. Lovely haiku, Kat. ❤
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October 26th, 2016 at 1:29 pm
Thanks Olga. Nice memory you shared too! 🙂
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