“Will you PLEASE get off the floor Sarah!?”
“I’m good. Really! How much longer?”
“We’re almost there. But you’re missing the view. If you could just slide up onto the seat…”
“Nope! I told you, I’m good. Take pictures.”
It was not going the way Nick envisioned it. The banner was coming into view on the hillside. Everyone could see it. Everyone, that is, but Sarah, whose fear of heights had sent her into a panic.
Frustrated, Nick took a photo on his phone, then dropped to the floor where Sarah sat with her arms wrapped around her knees.
He held the phone for her to see.
“Will you Marry Me, Sarah?” the banner said.
Sarah looked at the phone, at Nick, and then at the other passengers, whose faces were beaming with anticipation. When she looked back at Nick, he was holding a ring in his other hand.
She shook her head. “I hate you, you know! But yes…YES! I will marry you!” Everyone cheered!
Nick smiled, holding her close as he leaned in whispering, “I guess this means my idea to exchange our vows in a hot air balloon is a bust…”
kat ~ 18 May 2016
(194 Words)
Flash Fiction for Sunday’s Photo Fiction Challenge prompted by the photo above. To read more click HERE.
May 18th, 2016 at 1:15 pm
Haha.I like this. To me it’s very real life. On TV etc men always make such great proposals on shows but they never think about things like the woman being scared of heights. Happy it worked out and that we all have cell phones now that can snap a picture. Nice write 🙂
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May 18th, 2016 at 2:32 pm
Thanks Mandi! I am terrified of heights myself, so this photo resonated with me immediately! 🙂
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May 18th, 2016 at 2:51 pm
So adorable! I would ring his neck cause by now he should know about her fear of heights, right?
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May 18th, 2016 at 3:44 pm
Absolutely! Some people think by forcing you to face your fears you can overcome them. 🙂
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May 18th, 2016 at 5:06 pm
I have a fear of heights and aversion therapy is not at all helpful for me! I’ve tried and literally find my palms sweating and just cannot do some things…
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May 18th, 2016 at 6:18 pm
I feel your angst! Me too!
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May 18th, 2016 at 6:24 pm
😦
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May 18th, 2016 at 5:44 pm
Oh wow, this did make me chuckle. I can totally see this really happening! 😀
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May 18th, 2016 at 6:19 pm
Haha! I know the feeling well!
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May 22nd, 2016 at 5:07 am
great story! Loved the happy ending and really felt for her (and him) – 🙂
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May 22nd, 2016 at 5:11 am
Thank you Jesse! 😊
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May 22nd, 2016 at 5:58 am
That’s the third proposal story in a row I have read 🙂 Great story Kat.
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May 22nd, 2016 at 6:39 am
How interesting. I must have a look! ❤️
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May 22nd, 2016 at 7:07 am
Haha! I love this! Thankfully he thought of taking a photo with his phone instead of just giving up! Great read!☺
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