On the first true frigid Winter day of the season, I noticed my neighbor’s sad drooping sun flag. It was a beautiful sunny day…blue skies, no clouds. But despite the bright golden sunlight, the air cut through me like a knife. I wondered…is the golden orb I presume to be the sun an imposter? Like my neighbor’s faded sun flag, has the sun checked out? This is how my monkey brain churns the world around me. Now you have a glimpse of how I came to write this poem…:)
Old King Sol
has lost his soul
No Midas touch
No warming glow.
A lame imposter’s
frigid glare now
Hangs pathetic
frost on air!
Seems old Sol
has slipped away
on migratory holiday.
Here left to weather
winter’s sting
we hang our hope
on this one thing…
that Sol remembers
us, come Spring.
kat ~ 5 January 2015
January 5th, 2016 at 9:45 pm
I am SO with you on that! The low sun on the horizon just does NOT give out the heat!
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January 5th, 2016 at 9:50 pm
it’s a faux sun in my book. 🙂
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January 5th, 2016 at 9:53 pm
So true. I feel a Haiku from you coming out of faux sun. 😉
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January 5th, 2016 at 9:57 pm
Ha ha…I’m currently scratching my head while working on a few Haiku challenges…the word “Find” is on my plate right now from Haiku Horizons. Can’t pluck the words out of the air for this one! Haha. (It took me all day…on and off to pull out Old King Sol)…;) Though I was swamped at work so not a lot of breathing room to muse. 🙂
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January 6th, 2016 at 10:50 am
Lovely poem! The weather sounds to be the same here!
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January 6th, 2016 at 11:36 am
Thank PJ…It is FREEZING here! Winter has finally arrived! 🙂
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January 6th, 2016 at 12:22 pm
Same here Kat, and I hate it! LOL!
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January 6th, 2016 at 1:03 pm
very nice! Very cold over my way!
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January 6th, 2016 at 10:29 pm
I think we are all in a deep freeze now 🙂
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January 6th, 2016 at 10:34 pm
yes I think so. It warmed up here to 30!! So snow is melting finally!
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January 6th, 2016 at 11:11 pm
We have only seen a few flurries. I’m sure there is still time for the whit stuff!
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January 7th, 2016 at 7:40 am
oh yes!!
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January 7th, 2016 at 11:03 am
I love a bit of snow. Looking forward to it 🙂
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January 7th, 2016 at 11:19 am
yes me too
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January 9th, 2016 at 1:53 pm
He didn’t go away, he’s just down here in Florida…
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